Because quarantine is in effect, I was bored. That boredom resulted in this rewrite.

Well, gratz both on the actual artist and the rewrite, that's just my jam

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I like the thick girls he makes.

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This is well enough rewrite. Good work. lol

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tagging "rewrite" you might as well tell me you have the bubonic translating plague because whatever you're spreading is just going to kill anyone it touches.

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Actual Translation: /g/1013694/f005d2d96c/

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Thanks for feeding my Mommy Kink

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this likely would not be OK if the genders were reversed.

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this is the first time ive seen a rewrite not have a terrible score let alone over 4 lol

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oh so nice rewrite, i love it :3
itou+mom/son so hot
it nice if you do mom/son rewrite to this /g/1556243/cc3af6ff65/

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oh snap this is not his real mom I want to see this continue to a chapter 2 or so on I love stories like this and the pure sexyness of it. Keep up the great work I hope to see more soon.

Love the re write here I hope to see more soon.

Last edited on 29 June 2020, 17:49.

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Wow I hadn't noticed it was a rewrite. Reading over the original, I actually enjoyed this one a lot better. Like wow good work.

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this one works out better than the original, good job

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Actually better than the original, too bad most rewrites seem to be by people with recent traumatic brain injuries.

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"even though i'm not the ideal mother"

you don't fucking say lmao

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