another doujin translated and this time with the 2 alters joining the fray!!

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as usual enjoy the gallery!!

EDIT: thanks @Addelheim and @DeusExCalamus for pointing those out, gallery has been updated!!

Beautiful, great translation thank you for sharing!

Base +15, Overlol +6

Alter Servants sure are scary... Lol

Base +7, Silver_Kirin +6, Jamesbryans +6, MechWarriorNY +9, Whitu Piggu +7, tobeunforgiven2 +24

@Fate Averruncus thats what make them more appealing when you dominate them

Base +9, Quote Marks +9, xgf123 +5, causticamygdala -3, alizzer -6

Page 12: upper right panel Right it’s better to not to consider unnecessary things. Right it’s better not to consider unnecessary things just had an extra to.
Page 22: expected was misspelled as excepted.
Beyond those small minor mistakes everything is superb quality.

Oh thank you for bothering to fix the minor mistakes!

Last edited on 24 March 2020, 11:44.

Base +15, tobeunforgiven2 +24

It's always nice when femdom actually stays femdom and doesn't flip halfway through.

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That old archer knew this would happen.

Thanks papa.

Base +8, MechWarriorNY +9, Hue_Hue +6, LordKronos +6

Hot nicely drawn FGO femdom. Fine translation. Pity about the censorship level.

Base +27, MechWarriorNY +9, tobeunforgiven2 +24, LordKronos +6

p5
'hancuffs'
should be
'handcuffs'
Same error on next page in the note, and again on the page after that; also should be 'these handcuffs', not 'this'
p13
'Aren't you showing cute face' should probably be 'Aren't you showing such a cute face?'
p15
'What, that's not problem' probably should be 'What, that's not a problem'
p17
'feels so good' should be 'feel so good'
p18
'infront' should be 'in front'
p19
'frimly lick' should be 'firmly lick'; 'able to breath' should be 'able to breathe'; 'exicited' should be 'excited'
p23
'it can't be help', should be 'it can't be helped'
Fix these and you'll be doing alright.

Last edited on 26 March 2020, 06:54.

Base +7, Lipid +7, tobeunforgiven2 +24

translation was pretty rough, kind of hard to follow

Base +7, tobeunforgiven2 +24