First translation, not sure how good I did with editing.

Full: /g/1618181/53fa5c09e7/

Last edited on 22 April 2020, 00:04.

Base +2, Dnkz +23, shuntensatsu +15, BaconBuddha +6

Good work man, keep going!

Base +6, shuntensatsu +15

Sorry to say that, but you made two big mistakes:
1. you used left align for your text insted of center align
2. you used e-hentai's downscaled 1280 px horizontal images for editing instead of the full res version. You can get the full sized images via one of the following methods:
a.) torrent download (if available; WARNING: torrents not always contain the latest or the full res version of the gallery. Downscaled torrents normally have 1280x in its name)
b.) Archive Download (Click an " Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and GP or Credits required)
c.) The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual page; e-hentai account and GP or Credits required)

Otherwise it's okay for a first.

Base +16, JukanX +24, Salesmany +7, BaconBuddha +6, quack_duck +8

Ancient-Alien, thanks for the input. I actually used paint to do this (lol) and idk if I'll even bother to do any more. It just really bothered me that this hentai had 4 more untranslated pages, years after the rest was translated. I felt like somebody had to do it.

Base +2, zam005 +8, TheBrojangles +6, BaconBuddha +6, quack_duck +8, Azerty72200 +3