Great stuff, very nice, thanks for all the effort and sharing :)

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Props to the artist for their pragmatism, transparency, and communication.

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What do you mean by not seeing improvement. The style is consistent for a reason. It's what people like so why would they change it all of a sudden.

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bruh are you kidding me this is by far better then what out there and i personally like the art style, it has changed a bit from when the artist first started posting. you're fucking spoiled this shit is free you bum

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Just another thick-ass flat girl with a penis.

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Hope the author will create a PIXIV or Hentai Foundry account. Will miss him after the site closed.

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yea...wai...what? the site is closing? Do you mean e-hentai is closing? If so, when? I'm the original author, so your advice on where I should create further accounts would be super helpful. Thank you!

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@GeeU
Things are really hot at this moment. There were supposed legal problems in netherland and so, Tenboro blocked sadpanda. things have been really moved since jul 26. Admins said they are looking for a solution so closing the site is still NOT definitive.
And anons already are working in a site backup. i can give you the link for a page where they are uploading everything they can.

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^ what are other alternatives if this site is closed?

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As of now. The crisis is averted. Possibly for the foreseeable future. However, there can never be a guarantee...
That said. Artist your style is fantastic! Please feel pride in your work. I don't say this lightly, but you have potential to be as great as some very infamous artists.
You know who. <3

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tenboro got a solid two mil I think the site is good.

@3DDD I love the concept here and a lot of the frames are good but there are occasional inconsistencies in the anatomy and linework that tells me the artist does not have a steady grasp on the fundamentals and/or is half-assing it. like, look at the claw hands on pg 6 and 7.
now whether or not there are marked improvements isn't really relevant, at least to me. as long as the style is consistently good I don't care. but for this kind of quality I wouldn't pay that much in a year let alone a month.
but it's also as you said. "if people are down - get that money..."
I'd imagine there are people that enjoy the story enough to overlook the issues with the art.
at least the framing is good.

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omg omg omg omg its starting again.... i am very excited to see what those swimmer jocks are going to do with our beloved Yuki. Its amazing what a collar will do to encourage obedience 🤗 Don't listen to the rest Geeu, this is amazing work, and we understand way more goes into each page than just the visual artistry.

I have been following for a long time and for what its worth, the quality of your artwork has improved from "omg fucking saved" to "I woke up at 3:40AM to check and refresh after the second update in so long only to get halfway through the newest page and cum in my underwear..." AND i find the story overall pretty gripping.. moving.. penetrating.. and love reingesting each frame and really getting into the dialogues both the internal and external ... THIS is quality and we should ALL hang our heads for not supporting you more.

Go back to issue 1 and read to this newest update. Fuckin' A. With D. Fuckin Bravo Geeu 🤘😲🤘 THAT is an evolution of skill to the next level. Since issue 1 page 3 i prayed for a swim meet and you have been such a tease until now; now its a fuck fest. God Dam top shelf bravo 👏😭

Last thing is I have *NEVER* opened a gallery page mid session and found something I didn't like and immediately change my plans to put both hands on the keyboard and comment to the artist on my displeasure. Imagine their disappointment to have to watch a mood killing gallery thread. What a bunch of selfdepreciating rotting dermoids. YOU fucking keep it up, I am strangely satisfied having lain civilizations worth of loads down and watching this thread for updates. I promise to support you more financially in a tangible patreonically way someday.

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We love you Geeu, we support your dream and share your fantasy. Gawd. Goosebumps. I am already back checking again and just tickled you replied 🥰

Praise earned and well deserved that is for sure. I thought the claw fingers on the pregnant sow frame were great contouring of the bulging belly being pressed on by Madam, in my opinion anyway 👍

EDITED: OMFG! /me splooshes.

EDITED: YES!! I love the internal dialogue Yuki goes through... I can tell this is something close to your heart Geeu, reading the words gives me butterflies in my tummy, how exciting in a most ... dirty.... carnal lust filled way... Heart-pupils all the way. This is getting me really revved up🥰❤🥰 my hands are shaking...

EDITED: HOLY lord.... look at her face... Yuki is taking the full plunge into it, she loves it... We can see it on her face, and we are so proud of her Geeu. What a good girl Yuki is, she wanted this... A two page update, I can barely wake it past the first thrèe frames without dry humping my body pillow... I bet you know what I mean when I say I wish I was her... I dont think she could have made a better decision, fhat is, to stay out late with her friends and let them do ... depraved... perverted things to her body... and she (now collared) is powerless to resist, and I wouldn't put up much of a convincing fight either... riveting, we love and support you 🥰❤🥰 so much foreshadowing... "you wouldnt want your friends to see you covered in cum.." ..."you sure thats what you want?" ... i am quivering while reading this... so much growth and exploration... such a willingness, and so easily convinced with just reciprocity.. yuki has been a willing perverted little slut boy with something missing in her life, and now with exploring new university life, her whole world has changed, she even says "i only think of new ways to please master" and speaks to him as if he is ever present with her "Master, what have you done to me" ...Yuki was always a girly slut... Master and Madam grooming her brushes away all other cares..She always wanted that swim team gang bang... go back to the first pic of Yuki from the first issue and that trampy girly bashful pose makes a lot more sense, subconsiously from being surrounded by them, Sam (who she claims is bigger, taller, and totally cute now <SUPER CRUSH> even just touching her and noticing her arousal sends lightning bolt electricity through her nerves and she almost loses it right there in the subway ... Yuki is a fucking super star, and can never die, she will only grow more beautiful and depraved as your desires dare to admit they long to go darling 🥰

EDITED: <angels singing> finally the swim suit reveal... I died... I just came in my panties again. Its 5:30 AM and thst page just made my day... Gawd I wish I had one of those... A Sam I mean 😏

EDITED: Thank you, I am so in love with heart pupils, it takes me somewhere inside, somewhere lusty 😍

EDITED : I still check this gallery multiple times a day 😍 so grateful that you are doing well and not sick or worse, all the love and prayers with anybody touched by this illness CV19

EDITED: I saw your update, my heart breaks for you. I will pray for you, and your family, and your safe return home.

All our love.

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Wow! That is HIGH PRAISE mcom1981!!! Thank you so much! People often forget that it's a human being behind the creation of these things... and in this case an artist. If you don't know what I mean by that, I'll explain: as an artist, this is a labor of love, and especially in this case, it's a very personal story to me (eg. I'm not working for Marvel drawing someone else's characters while someone else writes the story etc). So, every time I push enter to update this gallery, or put myself out there on reddit, -every time- it feels like I'm tell the whole world my deepest, most guarded secrets, and just hoping you wont rip me apart for it. That's probably the best way to I can describe it to someone who isn't an artist creating their own work. Imagine having to tell everyone around you the most embarrassing, or most hidden secret you have, and you do it daily or weekly. Its f-ing scary guys! So when people give me praise, it's like going to an AA meeting and having people encourage you to face those addiction demons. It motivates me more than you could imagine! It gives me courage in ways most people can't relate. So Let me say Thank you again to everyone who has had my back!

For those who have given me critical feedback (like DarkShadows6): keep it coming! But just be kind, or constructive (which you were :D). At first I would get all offended by negative comments. I'd take the defensive position of, 'well what do the know!". Unfortunately that was a shitty way to face it. I realize, that critical feedback keeps me improving, and it keeps me on my toes so that I never get lazy or complacent. But like I said, it's scary to put yourself out there (especially with this subject matter... I mean... look at what I'm drawing lol). So my defensive position would be considered natural, but very egotistical. Because, if I'm offended by the comments, I cant hear what you are saying, and therefore I cant learn more, because I've already refused to listen to whatever good feedback you've given. But you've made some good points (especially about the hands), and so I shall take special note to work on it. :D

But I will add one final point though about my fees on Patreon: I have 3 tiers of subscription: $1 gives you access to the main comic, $5 gives you access to the main comic plus the image series sets, and the $45 category is for custom commissioned work, plus access to the previous tiers. Now! there is criticism on that being expensive... well let me break it down for you a bit so you understand that my prices are actually underrated! The $45 category - those images take anywhere for 4-6 hours to draw. So if you break that down to dollars per hour, im making $7.50-$11.25/hour. At that rate, I'm practically giving the artwork away for free. For the image series sets, I release them in batches of 4-6 pages a week and those take about 20-25 hours to complete, and for the main comic it takes 25-35 hours complete one page (depending on how many panels per page etc.) That includes the writing and all the type-setting (so drawing the chat bubbles and motion lines etc.). So when you say (DarkShadow6) that you wouldn't pay $5 a month, let alone in a year, that's kind of a big slap in the face. I also work a regular job because the amount I'm making so far isn't enough to live off of in North America, and my job is a creative job as well, which means I'm stretching the same creative muscles from the moment I wake up to the moment I go to bed, and I've been doing it now for 3 f-ing years! Im getting a little tired, but I love doing this, and I know that i'm building something from nothing, so I know I have to work harder than the average bear to get it done. But when you say, its not worth the minimum value that I charge because I draw claw hands on occasion because I'm just trying to get through some of the more boring pages to draw (which are hard to get done when you've already worked a full day designing some packaging for Tuna, or re-branding a local beverage to compete with Coca-Cola brands - Im a graphic designer by day btw), kinda feels like a kick to the junk! lol.

So in conclusion, I value the critical feedback, so keep that coming. I'll be happy to hear it if it helps me improve. But also, understand there is a person behind the art, and this person needs to make money off this if you want me to keep creating these comics. Which sucks! Because I wish I could just give it away for free, but as you can see from the break down, it's practically a full-time job to build these pages, and we live in a society where I need to eat and money is how we make that happen.

Ok! thanks for reading, and thanks for all the support everyone! And I want to be clear, I dont say any of this will malice or anger. I just want to inform people of how this works behind the scenes, and thank you for your continued patience :D

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I was going by what the other guy said, I didn't know your tiers. $5 is a lot more reasonable. I appreciate your measured tone, and good on you for your attitude.

I took another look and probably the only real complaint I have like I said is the consistency, specifically with proportions and perspective. for example, on pg 2 compare the standing height of panel 1 to the kneeling position in the 3rd panel. homie looks like a squashed dwarf. upper arms have receded in length and the left forearm is deformed.

looking at pg 5, all the hands look some kind of weird, and it seems the number of fingers varies. the more I look at it the more I think this could be caused by too-wide inking, so that the fingers appear to melt together. daddy's fingers have a different issue though, his hand is too smooth when compared to the stark detail on the dude's face; look at the bottom left panel on 5 for example. also he's missing shading in the 4th panel.

I could keep going but I think you get the point.

it might not be the best business decision since it will upset your publishing schedule, but if I were you I would spend more time focusing on perspective, depth, and taking measurements to ensure consistency; I would also try to be more precise when inking.

[ps: it's clear you have talent and enjoy what you do, and at the end of the day it's your art and your style; what might be mistakes in some eyes might be perfect to you. look at bbmbbf, fucker hasn't improved a single iota and all his websites still suck ass, yet he rakes in mad money and still seems to enjoy it.]

[pps: friend of mine swears by these: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B001OBMZI]

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God damn I like GeeU's works, every new art is better then previous. I will definitely become patreon soon.

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I haven't personally noticed any art problems. I'm not an artist. I really enjoy your story. The BDSM elements are super hot. The writing doesn't feel transphobic to me as so often happens in comics with similar subjects (as a non-binary trans person). The inner monologues feel really good and in general I feel like the writing has successfully captured a sub's experience (as a sub horny for a Master/Daddy). The story and writing are suuuper fucking hot. I really like how you draw guys with bear builds and don't draw them as unhygenic, rapey, socially inept morons, and instead flatter their traits. (ex. Master pounding Yuki and completely dwarfing her in size and stature). The encounter with Sam on the train was funny and I also felt like it was well-written and realistic and squirm-inducing. In general I like the pace of the story

I had a very hard time following the direction and flow of the speech bubbles. I had to reread most pages several times to try and build a consistent story in my head. I wish it was it was explicitly clear and obvious to me in what order I'm supposed to read the panels and bubbles in. It often felt like I had to jump between sides of a panel and between bubble trees and I lost track of what was going on very often.

anyway thank you for this comic, it's really lovely and hot and cool, and it's cool to be able to provide feedback and speak so directly to you, GeeU. c: It's been a while since I read one of your comics and I was very much enthralled. I really appreciate how you feel about your work (feeling like it's a secret to be told and retold publicly) and how candidly you describe your process.

I wish you all the best.

Love,

Tripwire__

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Thank you all for your comments! mcom1981 for reals high praise haha! Everything you've said makes me happy! Your reaction is pretty much what Im hoping for from people who read my comic! And thanks for taking the time to express it! You didn't have to, but it means the world to me that you did!

To DarkShadow6: Thanks for coming at me with some good critical feedback. Most of what you're saying makes sense especially about consistency. As I've mentioned before, I have another full time job, and sometimes I take several days off between drawing. And when i do that, it often feels like I'm almost relearning how to draw some of the detailed work when I get back to it. So that's why the inconsistency exist. So in the future I'm going to try and keep my breaks shorter so that I keep more of the muscle memory used for staying consistent. Also, I'm definitely paying more attention to detailing the hands. I figured cutting a few corners in that area on the smaller panels would help keep me on schedule, but if they are a distraction, then its important to not cut too many corners. But I will add (and you called it), I am on a tight schedule for trying to balance all the work I do. So your suggestions for spending more time working on certain aspects is unrealistic if I want to complete pages in a timely fashion. I realize you are giving me feedback as an artist - looking at every panel as a mini piece of art. But the truth is, I'm a story teller more than an artist, and getting the pages out regularly is my primary goal. That being said, all the things you suggested I improve upon, I will most certainly work on them, but it will be a slow growing process, instead of me trying to master it all before the next page kinda thing. I'll slowly try new methods and techniques, but if they take too long, I'll have to just cut that corner and ask for your forgiveness lol.
OH! And one more thing you mentioned that I have to clarify, on page 2 you mentioned my perspectives were off between the images - that's because those 3 images come from 3 totally different scenes that are drawn in totally different perspectives, I just collaged them together. I'm guessing you don't subscribe to me on Patreon, but if you did, you would know those images come from a series I only release on Patreon. Its called Yuki's Training Days and they feature different events where Yuki is being trained up before here final 'test' in this comic. But if you didn't know that, then ya, it all looks like one image with horrible perspective issues lol. If you see it someday, you'll see that in the first panel where you say Yuki looks like a scrunched up dwarf (which I totally giggled about), you'll notice the perspective looks a lot more correct when seen in its original context.

And Tripwire: about following the panels, I hear you! There were a couple of pages that I drew and then tried to make the text fit, but just couldn't seem to figure out a clear way! But I am very conscious about it, and strive to better my visual hierarchy skills. I draw the comic in a square format because I knew it was going to be an online comic (so fills a screen better than your traditional comic page format), but I didn't realize that it actually makes it a lot more difficult to draw panels that seem to naturally lead to each other. So it has been a struggle, but I think Im getting better at it, and will keep trying to improve! :D But thank you for your compliments on the writing and story telling. I know I can draw, but writing I'm still a wee bit insecure about. I hope Im staying true to characters voice and demeanor, and keeping a good pace without too much repetition. But if you (or any of you) feel like Im falling down in those areas, let me know! :D

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I do admit from my personal experience, being choked out really does help when you're a bottom. :3

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about the perspective, I was really only talking about the bottom panel, the others are fine. if it (the smushed stature) was done for an artistic reason and makes sense in context then that's fine, like I said as an artist you want to first and foremost make your own style present. I'm a strickler for correctness though so I did notice it, but on my scale it's less important as a solitary issue and more like it sets my expectations for later on, again, at least for me. others may not even notice it eg @Tripwire__

as long as you keep working to improve and continue such excellent communication with your community, I'm sure you will be successful. 👍

ed: just read through the rest of the series, and I gotta say, you weren't wrong about being more of a storyteller (and I mean that the story is fun). getting into it, the issues don't really mean as much when you're here for the story, esp. now that I'm used to your style. pretty cool how that works.

something I think I prefer is actually your cg sets over the unique panel comics, you seem to be more verbose and free with the writing that way and I'd be lying if I wasn't a sucker for the abject sissification. but that one is totally just my opinion.

if I didn't hate Patreon and refuse to give them my money you'd have a patron.

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Any chance for the first parts of this comic? Seems like a bit is missing from the start.

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Im pretty sure its complete. what part seems incomplete to you?

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@TotalAbyss You have some other story of her ;)

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aWww! Is that what TotalAbyss meant?
Thank you Tsuriai for catching that :D

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hopefully the rest of the pages get uploaded soon. Really want to see how this chapter ends.

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這封面......五漢並瀆

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This is without a doubt my absolute fav hentai series of all time. It even beats Bible Black and the trap stuff by Andava <3

All I can say is I hope you do more and go more extreme with it! More x-ray shots would be cool too, like seeing huge amounts of cum pouring into Yuki's stomach ^.^

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shit's gud my brehs

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Thanks everyone for the compliments! Its always great to hear that people like my stuff! But, Princess Cake, your comment about being better than Andava - I love Andava's work. I subscribe to them on patreon myself. So for you to say that Im better than his/her trap stuff is a huge compliment in my opinion! So thank you very much! Its made me very motivated to keep going! :D

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@GeeU First of all (EEEE! Senpai noticed me!) I was curious where you might take the Yuki character. Have you considered possibly making her start female hormones so she develops her breasts further? You could nearly make half a story out of her just being really scared to go out in public and have people see the huge mountains on her chest :P

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Haha! I DID notice you Princess Cake! lol
As for your wonder about whether Yuki will go down the route of hormone transformation - I will most likely not take it down that path :( Sorry! There are a few people who have asked if that's where I'm taking it, and I've thought long and hard about it, but that isn't how I saw Yuki's future unfolding. That being said, next issue, I'm introducing another 3 new Trap characters, and I might take one of or more of them there. So, its a little bit of a compromise for fans! :D

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