Whers the blowjob or handjob or footjob tt. Dis too soft

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This is so textbook Deviantart. The dialogue, the self-insert, the "plot", everything.

I know this nitpicking an amateur comic, but I'll point out one issue that's just outright sloppy. looking to me. Syllveon's size in regards to the self--insert protagonist changes in each panel. It should be impossible for her to sit on him and lick his feet at the same time with how their body proportions are drawn in panels 1 and 2 of page 14. She's too big for that, she'd have to raise her ass to get to his feet. The author tries to hide how inconsistent their sizes are in relation to each other by focusing on close-ups.

Last edited on 27 December 2019, 11:21.

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I like where this I going, keep up the good work

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A suprisingly funny read just hope it stays cute and doesn't dive into vore like every other giant comic

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@sunshineandlolipops the original ver has blowjob and a Jolteon instead of a Pikachu. You can see it here /g/1584752/876bc17af7/

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@sunshineandlolipops The self insert is not textbook deviantart, what are you talking about?
Usually it's some dude that looks exactly like the artist - this has the decency of having a character who kind of looks like Anon-which allows everyone to self insert; and not just the author

Last edited on 11 August 2022, 08:36.

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@Papi587 The presence of a self-insert character itself is textbook deviantart. Clearly this "anon" is being written with the author in mind, it's undeniable. The original porn version draft of this comic with the Jolteon instead of the Pikachu even had the character drawn as "some dude that looks exactly like the author": /g/1584752/876bc17af7/ Just because he's drawn as an anon in this version doesn't make the intentions any less transparent or the writing any less cringeworthy.

Last edited on 11 August 2022, 13:27.

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/g/1584752/876bc17af7/ ?

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@sunshineandlolipops It's two different artists https://puu.sh/FtU2J/0bc9b2aebd.png, source https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33173357/

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@FrostyOwl Hence when I wrote about the self-insert I wrote "author" not "artist". As in story author.

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The concept of sapient pets is very weird...

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Will this be continued?

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