My third translation. This time I translated the actual japanese text to english, unlike my previous two which I translated from a different language translation. Thanks for those who gave feedback, and I look forward to receiving more constructive feedback.

Actual futa is so fucking stupid and I love it.

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That's half of the allure, ain't it?

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Thanks.

Thoughts:
I'd pick better fonts. Make the text bigger and not bold in the square "narration" boxes, and try to make them fill the space better. Maybe increase line spacing (to an extent). Pick something more legible for the speech bubbles (especially the interviewer). CC Astro City is a common choice, IIRC. It's been a few months since I last typeset something.

Try to avoid single-word lines where you can; On page five, for instance:
"Probably over
three
hundred
so far."
It's likely you could fit three hundred on a single line, so it'd be prudent to try to do so. The fewer line breaks, the better for legibility and flow. Also, try to keep the lines of similar length where possible.

Other than that, not bad. Typesetting has a lot of subtleties that are easy to forget or simply not know about. I am sure I still make lots of the same mistakes when I do it but it's easier to see when it's not my own work. Thanks for sharing. The translation seems pretty natural to me, which is good.
Thanks for translating the map, too. It's a nice little touch.

Also, I'm often disappointed with my own past efforts because I tend to figure out little tricks as I'm working on the typesetting, and then I don't always remember to go back and apply my new techniques to the earlier completed pages. It takes so long to do a good job that I'm honestly impressed with how well you did and how consistent it looks throughout. My later pages usually look cleaner than my earlier ones, which is the reverse of how I should do it because first impressions matter a lot.

IonicTHI: I also prefer when people use the highest available resolution, but if you have a problem with it, then fix it yourself. You're getting a free english translation.
The only time it bothered me enough to fix it myself was when the scan that someone used was watermarked and tiny when a better one existed (I did re-typeset that; looking back I see a few problems with it but am still pretty satisfied).

Last edited on 28 May 2020, 19:06.

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I want to see doujin about...the futa clinic! Mysterious base! Ruins! Retirement center...ah...I'd better shut up now.

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An ERECTION JELLYFISH!

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"Cocksavers"

You got me there.

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This thing is fucking hilarious! The font is not the best though. Thanks for translating.

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I get what you mean by the typesetting stuff. I did a near 1:1 from what was written in Japanese, with some minor grammatical changes for common english habits, etc. It was definitely tricky in some of those bubbles to get what was originally fit there, and I tried to avoid having fluctuating font sizing throughout the comic. As for Date-san's font, I probably could've chosen better. It started to get confusing with who was talking when they both had the same font based on where the word bubbles were placed, and some were oddly shaped without any source-point (you know what I mean). I'll get better over time. This is just a labor of love right now while in quarantine and out of work.

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全裸扶她的黑皮辣妹好棒哦

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The original is in perfectly leveled 3k resolution 8 bit png with max compression and yet once again a new scanlator manages to not download the originals, even when they are that perfect...
What s worse most of them will not even try and fix that and so we are stuck with some horribly downscaled, half arsed job.
Labor of love or not when you do a scanlation of something 99% of the time noone else will do their own version or try to fix yours.
Can this please stop?
Please fix your shit.

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Really appreciate your openness to critique with the mentality of improving, we need more like you Rhystil. Godspeed and appreciate your efforts.

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Bad boys bad boys... whatcha gonna do... whatcha gonna do when they cum for you?

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@IonicTHI You don't like it? Your fap material not up to your standards? Can't beat meat to something someone on the internet uploaded that is still perfectly readable? Man, that must suck to be you.

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My mind says "nope, she's got a dick" and my 2nd mind says "man just move the balls out of the way, she's hot and still has a vagina".

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"Cocksavers" is a bit of a mis-localization. The japanese pun is based on how lifeguards are called "life savers" in Japanese; it'd work better in english as "cockguards" or something similar.
You've also got the wrong meaning of おばさん/obasan: in this case it's 小母さん, not 伯母さん. Something like "I'm just an old maid", not "I'm already an aunt".

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cool house, lol

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RAW: /g/1618259/d63207f7e1/
RAW: /g/1604437/77ac42f687/
ENG: /g/1647274/fb92200a13/ (you are here)
KOR: /g/1622938/9e69549438/
CHN: /g/1643342/9a88b5269f/

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Fuck. So, I was in the process of re-typesetting this whole comic. Then my hard drive decided to eat shit and I ended up losing all of my in-process comics, including all of the decensoring I was doing on another comic I typeset and translated.

What this means:

It's gonna be even longer until I post a new comic, or even redo any typesetting of any finished comics. Just, fyi.

Here is a decensored and supremely HQ English translation: /g/1907788/70f7799b56/

Last edited on 11 May 2021, 05:07.

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