Did another proof of corori's doujins. Last one had a few grammatical mistakes, but this one had quite a bit.

Maybe I'll keep doing this if I find a doujin I really like but has a lot of errors.

If I missed anything, let me know.

Translation: KomeijiOFC

Edit: So apparently one of the pages was never even translated. I'm gonna try and see if I can find someone who will do it since I don't speak Japanese

There's a page missing from this gallery: /s/f2f5e8b86c/975577-21

Thanks for the good work!

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Edit: Seems I was mistaken and didn't realize this was edited on someone else's translation. So the mistake of using resamples is not entirely yours. My apologies. I'm still leaving my old comment up in case it helps someone else. If you find a doujin in 1280x resolution that you want to fix, it would be very much appreciated if you re-edited the whole thing on the original resolution if that's not too much work.

Original comment:

Thanks for translating this. However you should use the original resolution in your next work. This doujin here is 1280x1800 resolution while the raw is 2150x3000. This most likely happened because you mistakenly downloaded the resample version instead of the original. The original version should always be used for editing to ensure your translation has the same resolution as the raw.

Here's how you can download the full resolution original version of any gallery:

Click on "Archive Download" and then "Download Original Archive".
If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the "Download Original Source" link below each opened image in gallery.
If you download via torrent then choose the torrent with bigger file size. Don't download the torrent with 1280x in its name.

Last edited on 04 June 2020, 10:32.

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there is no anal.
EDIT: Never mind just one panel.

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Yopparai Oni really seems to love Honoka...
I don't blame him, Honoka is cute
It seems they just retconned that random anal scene in as an afterthought.... A proper anal scene is arty onto itself..

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Impregnation is not confirmed.

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