[TSF no F (Hiiragi Popura)] The Story of How Became a Member♀ of a Tribe on an Unexplored Island and Became a Best Friend's Wife [English] [Sample]

Posted on 04 June 2020, 23:39 by: f_tsf

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Full version is Patreon reward.
https://www.patreon.com/posts/eng-full-story-i-38006681

FAKKU! will publish it late.
https://www.fakku.net/circles/tsf-no-f

Posted on 05 June 2020, 00:54 by: Mrsuperhappy

Without seeing the tags, and starting from Pg 2, I thought, this guy is getting genderbent. Something about it is always obvious.

Also, blood coming from your penis sounds pretty painful.

The dialogue is a bit ropey in parts;

"You were a girl before no?" followed right up by "you were a boy last time I saw you"

But the art is decent.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 01:11 by: f_tsf

> Also, blood coming from your penis sounds pretty painful.

After becoming a so-called futanari, the male genitals have disappeared, so it's not like the penis is bleeding from them. It's not a clear description, though.

> "You were a girl before no?" followed right up by "you were a boy last time I saw you"

Reread page 9.
At this point, Taichi is treating Kai as a girl, it's just that Kai's body is still a man.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 01:17 by: eric 1

ugh please put incomplete in the title

Posted on 05 June 2020, 01:45 by: King of bili

I don’t think that’s it..

Posted on 05 June 2020, 02:13 by: DarkCocoon

What the fuck... tsf himself posting a doujin here?

Posted on 05 June 2020, 02:14 by: defski

Fuck fakku. Fuck your patreon. Fuck you.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 02:27 by: ng34

We dont want your shit here

Posted on 05 June 2020, 03:09 by: UnlimitedBlades

Hm the art is not bad. Amulai makes good stuff. The translation is passable too. It's better than MTL but not at the native English level yet.

On a side note, why is F_TSF disliked around here? Is there some history?

Posted on 05 June 2020, 03:46 by: Meiluy

>On a side note, why is F_TSF disliked around here? Is there some history?

They have a history of coming here and other sites and attacking people that have done translations of their work, despite it often taking a long time for F_TSF to release translations, and usually at a far lower quality. They deserve the shit they get.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 04:34 by: TrustableBackstabber

You know you dont have to be so mad about the author. If you dont want to buy it just dont buy it. And if you want some free full english stuff just make your own secret society LoL.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 06:42 by: ast4

I think you should just let it go. F_TSF is trying to make a livelihood creating this content and that's not a bad thing.
It's worth recognizing in recent years he has made moves to better cater to the English crowd and has been less confrontational as well.

Personally I'd never pay for porn because it would be too shameful and depressing but maybe that business model will work for others.
I wish I could support through ads or something else that doesn't show up as an expense...

Posted on 05 June 2020, 07:44 by: dap00

I don't usually go for genderbending, but I have to say I'm interested less because this tribe has a magic tattoo that turns men into women, and more because it also turns people brown. You can say it's the sun, but for some reason I just don't buy that this time...

Posted on 05 June 2020, 09:31 by: Yun*

@f_tsf put it on fakku and i will buy it like usually. Bought so far everything u ever released. :)

Posted on 05 June 2020, 11:47 by: f_tsf

@Yun* I will send the .psd data to FAKKU tomorrow. So it should be available on FAKKU in a week, or at least a month from now! FAKKU will, of course, release a version without mosaic censorship. Stay tuned. By the way, it would be helpful if you could vote for a positive rating on my comment.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 11:51 by: Gixl

incomplete without anyone share raw? damnit...

story-wise, it's not that different from any other genderbend vanilla... with extra memory tempering (those 2 dudes slowly forget their past language and implanted with fake memories that he is she in the first place and teaching about spirits whatsoever...)

process-wise, this might be the most painful genderbending process depicted... having period before his penis completely gone sounds like a scary disease...

Posted on 05 June 2020, 11:59 by: Sessha

What's the point of having a setting full of exotic island babes and then pairing two generic Japanese fuckos?

Posted on 05 June 2020, 15:24 by: may sexy

i dislike that part where they get slowly brainwashed. he no longer aware he was a guy. seem kind of mess up

Posted on 05 June 2020, 20:32 by: Psychotic Pastry

F, is the FAKKU translation going to be identical to this one, or are you allowing them to make their own? I remember you mentioned once that you pay a local Japanese company to do translations sometimes.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 21:42 by: f_tsf

@Psychotic Pastry FAKKU will publish almost the same data as this one. However, the mosaic censorship will be removed. Also, some minor changes have been made to the translation.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 21:55 by: Psychotic Pastry

If that's the case, then my suggestion is to stop paying the local company to translate your writing if you care about being represented at the highest quality possible. The work they're doing for you is competently translated, but it feels off and low quality to any native speaker. It doesn't feel natural or have emotion, and the use of idioms and slang is weak at best. You would know if someone who'd only been educated on the most formal Japanese in a classroom tried to write fiction in Japanese, right?

I'm saying this because I think you deserve the money you get from your comics, and when you spend that money on translations, it should be the best translation possible for the money so you can make more money. The translations you're paying for right now aren't going to do that, and it's a shame.

EDIT: Wanted to add, since this is the first chance I've ever had to interact with you, that I like your work and I hope you continue.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 23:02 by: f_tsf

@Psychotic Pastry

I'm only hiring a Japanese company, or in other words, a corporation established in Japan, to do the translation work for me, and that Japanese company is hiring foreigners to do the translation work.
However, I think the foreigners live in Asian countries where the company can hire cheaply.
Also, you may think that most of the readers of my works are native English readers, but in fact, they live in Germany, Sweden and France, etc. I question whether pursuing a translation like a native English speaker would be worth the cost.
On Patreon, I've had more than 100 people support me and I'm asking for feedback on the translation, and I haven't heard any complaints at the moment.
I've asked an American translator to translate texts of "Jewel Knights" and other some works. I might ask him to help me with the translation work, again.
Or maybe I could ask him to proofread it.
But, you'll have to wait until I have more time to do it, because it would be more administrative work for me than if I asked one company to do all the translation and typesetting.

Posted on 06 June 2020, 00:00 by: Psychotic Pastry

I'm glad you brought up Japanese companies hiring foreigners living locally, because I thought about mentioning it, but it was too specific. That's actually pretty well-known in the west, and it's looked upon poorly because the people they hire aren't usually that good at their jobs. Capcom has done it a lot in the past with the Mega Man (Rockman) video games, and the end result is that American fans make jokes about Mega Man having bad, lazy voice acting. I don't know what they're charging you, so I can't tell you that you'd absolutely get a better deal if you talked to a western translator, but it's worth thinking about.

For Patreon supporters, they should be appreciated and commended, but you can't trust that audience to give you honest feedback. People who give you money on Patreon are more about supporting you as a person than they are about supporting your work. The rest are good points. I'm not going to act like English speakers are the ONLY people who want to read your comics, and the time you have available is a big consideration too.

I doubt I'll have much more to say, so thanks for the civil conversation and your responses.

Posted on 07 June 2020, 01:46 by: Quatloco

I really wish I could buy this but fakku removed the possibility to ay with bitcoin and I don't own a credit card.

Posted on 07 June 2020, 10:35 by: mfspiegl

@F

Speaking as one of the Germans who love your work, I'd like to add my opinion: I agree that American slang isn't important and it can even seem weird if the characters are clearly Japanese, but talk like they are from New York. Your German, French and Swedish readers probably won't care when a character uses an unusual phrase as long as it makes perfect sense.

However, some mistakes are much bigger than that. For example the title of this story here is missing the Subject of the sentence. I don't know any European language that would just leave out a first person pronoun like that. I know that this is often done in Japanese, which may be why someone from Japan doesn't find it odd, but your German readers will notice.

Another example would be the line from TS Magical Girl Hiromi where a character says "hiar" instead of "hear". Mistakes like this can actually be more confusing for people who are not native English readers, because they don't know if this is some unknown English word they've never heard before.

I'll try to give a comparison in Japanese: Imagine someone wants to say "行きます" and instead writes it as "以きます". Sure, the reading of the Kanji is the same, and you can guess what the person wanted to say. But the moment you come across it, it will probably ruin the flow of the story. If the reader has to stop and think about what the sentence is supposed to be, then that's a big problem. And if this is what the reader sees on one of the first pages of the story, they will be more crtitical of the rest of the translation.

Posted on 08 June 2020, 03:28 by: f_tsf

@mfspiegl
日本語読めそうなので、日本語で書きます。

確かに、主語が欠落していますね。
自分で翻訳したタイトルは下記のものだったのですが、こっちの方がまだましだったかもしれないですね。
I became a tribe girl on a deserted island, and then I become my best friend's wife.
あるいは、
How I became a tribal girl on a unexplored island and become my best friend's wife.
とか。

Hiromiのは、単純にtypoで、翻訳ミスではないと思います。
typoに関しては、現在は、翻訳会社がダブルチェックしているはずなので、今後はほぼ無くなると思います。
（Hiromiについては、英語があまり得意でない日本の作家さんに写植をお願いしていました）

Last edited on 08 June 2020, 04:53.

Posted on 10 June 2020, 10:17 by: dc_

Fakku and Jacob are worse than the coronavirus

Posted on 06 September 2020, 01:57 by: HiddenAgenda

Not gonna lie, I spent the $10 just to finish this nut.

Posted on 15 December 2020, 08:01 by: Kereghan

Complete at: /g/1800065/1810419cb2/

Posted:	2020-06-04 23:39
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Language:	English TR
File Size:	4.87 MiB
Length:	19 pages
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language:	english translated
parody:	original
group:	tsf no f
artist:	hiiragi popura
male:	breast expansion crotch tattoo drugs exhibitionism feminization gender change tomgirl transformation
female:	big breasts crotch tattoo cunnilingus dark skin exhibitionism forced exposure large tattoo rape
other:	full color incomplete mosaic censorship no penetration sample

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[TSF no F (Hiiragi Popura)] The Story of How Became a Member♀ of a Tribe on an Unexplored Island and Became a Best Friend's Wife [English] [Sample]

[TSFのF (柊ぽぷら)] 未開の孤島で部族の一員♀になって親友の嫁になったお話 (TSFのFのほん 2020年4号) [英訳] [見本]