Hey guys, corruption fan Heartnsoul32 here!

This time I translated [Imitation Moon (Narumi Yuu)] Ore no Aishita Kanojo wa Mou Inai... (Sword Art Online), please enjoy!

Raw: /g/1642626/03e927f26f/
Chinese TR: /g/1651527/ccee207b37/
Text cleared: /g/1651526/db64acbc76/

Nice upload. The pupils on page 18 are very cute. Thanks for sharing this translation!

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Thanks, this is awesome. really love NTR Auna.

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Good TL, but the editing is a yikes.

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OMG, that ending page, I seriously didn't see that coming.
The sequel to this, if it ever gets one, will be quite a show to read xD

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some of the speech bubbles are empty and some grammatical errors and the editing is bad. overall still a somewhat decent TL (sarcasm)

Last edited on 05 June 2020, 12:28.

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Not really sure why you started using Esuna instead of Asuna. ア is a, エ is e.
Also not really sure why every comment is mentioning it being a good TL, but while I don't care enough to look through every page, the fact that you don't know katakana is pretty suspicious honestly.

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Honestly, the only thing that bothers me about stories like this is that some of the in-game nobles were already plenty evil before the new guys showed up. Hell, attempted rape by them is canon, so it's pretty hard to convince me the ones who came later are worse, even though they should be.

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While I'm a bit sad you don't like it, it is a secondhand TL from Chinese to Eng; I unfortunately cannot read japanese and noticed this TL wasn't done. Some japanese Kanji doesn't convert well into chinese I think... names are a bit rough. I don't have a typsetting or proofreader or anything. If anyone wants to work with me on this just drop me a line, but otherwise you might be waiting for someone else.

I take your point about the whole Esuna thing; I was wondering if it was a pun in chinese because it was pretty similar to "Evil-suna"? anyway I've updated it to Asuna

Also noticed two pages 3 and 23 were missing text for some reason, so the TL is complete now.

Last edited on 05 June 2020, 08:48.

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I know most people just wanna see Kirito cucked in these kinda dous and that Hentai logic triumphs over it all, but is anyone else just increasingly rolling their eyes at the ever-increasing amount of plot-holes they go for just to make it as Extreme NTR as possible? Even if we ignore the usual brainwash logic of almost every other SAO dou like this, or how in-VR-things affect real world biology just because, or that there were not enough STLs for all the girls to be pulled into the UDW nor were they even anywhere in that place to be 'taken' by PoH's gang (Being all the way on the mainland), there is also the fact that Kirito would have never woken up if Asuna had been caught. Or that they didn't have even an entire day before they had to run from their operation before being stormed by the military en masse, which is the only reason why Kikuoka's gang was able to just lock the door and wait them out.

I know I'm just gonna be downvoted to hell for trying to bring it up, but it really feels as if they went all-out with breaking the suspension of disbelief just for the sake of NTR...

Last edited on 05 June 2020, 10:17.

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If you want some help typesetting I can teach you some basics, just toss me a PM.

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>cucking kirito

I sleep

>turning kirito into a girl

BASED

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Good morning. Cucks and whores should be killed

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@HeartnSoul
For future projects: PLEASE read a typesetting guide like: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

The 3 biggest sins in typesetting:
1. Not center aligning your text
2. Use a non comic font (you can find free comic fonts (anime ace, komika, wurper comics, wurmics bravo, etc.) on sites like dafont.com
3. Use Comic Sans

Other big mistakes are : usind a program with "paint" in its name developed by Microsoft (you don't have to buy photoshop, using powerful free alternatives like GIMP is an option)
and using <3 for hearts is big NO unless the artist himself did use it. If you're using a good editing program just copy paste the original hearts especialy when the hearts are handdrawn.

To say something positve at the end: Good job on NOT making the very popular beginner mistake of using e-hentai's downscaled 1280px res for editing.

Edit:
@Fushinopanic
Well at second thought and reading: your right.
Hope you don't mind if I borrow your wording.

Last edited on 05 June 2020, 21:12.

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@Ancient-Alien

Your first sin makes it sound like you want them to not center align lol. "Not center aligning your text" is probably a better wording for the sin.

Edit: Of course not, feel free.

Last edited on 05 June 2020, 21:32.

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alicization doujins.
asuna not in stacia form...
I'm sad.

still a good fap tho.

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That <3 got very VERY annoying

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OH SHIT CANNOT WAIT FOR GENDERBENDER SEQUEL!

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The artist has started drawing his/her next SAO book: https://twitter.com/narumi_y/status/1301086704736980992
However, the artist said he/she is going to draw a Suguha book and he/she is still not sure about drawing a genderbent Kirito book: https://twitter.com/narumi_y/status/1291734190833065984

The cover of the artist's next SAO book. It will be a Leafa (Suguha) book.
https://twitter.com/narumi_y/status/1340278943610335232

Last edited on 19 December 2020, 12:59.

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Rough grammar
p3: its only -> it's only
p3: Mr Kikuoka instructions -> Mr.Kikuoka's instructions
p4: Kiriton-kun -> Kirito-kun
p4: its like -> it's like
p5: I was bestowed -> that was bestowed upon me
p6: happines -> happiness
p8: fuck me -> fucked me
p8: its this -> it's this
p9: stuck with -> filled with
p9: naseating -> nauseating

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I like the story.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 8. Translation 4. True to character 6. All out of 10.

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