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[Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Touchuukasou 7 [English] {Doujins.com} [Digital]

[シュート・ザ・ムーン (フエタキシ)] 冬虫夏草7 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2020-06-07 20:59
Parent:1653110
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Language:English  TR
File Size:54.32 MiB
Length:63 pages
Favorited:2982 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.72

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Posted on 07 June 2020, 20:59 by:   Viktor0nk    PM
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Translated by: (Striborg/ Lance)
Posted on 05 June 2020, 06:14 by:   Noni    PM
Score +57
Raw can be found here: /g/1626511/32f3347b0c/

Chinese TR: /g/1630081/9f98c30494/
Korean TR: /g/1630520/8c1f195be1/

Thanks for sharing this excellent threesome!
Posted on 05 June 2020, 07:09 by:   suratkabar    PM
Score +15
This bald kid really reminds me of Sarah Bonito's boyfriend the more I think about it lole
https://rbt.asia/mu/thread/70274736/
Posted on 05 June 2020, 07:10 by:   Brack Ahps Too    PM
Score +42
Thank you for the translation! I have been looking forward to one.
Posted on 05 June 2020, 07:36 by:   Morning Rain    PM
Score +12
I bet if there's new chapter the bald will fuck sisters in their house while lil bro watching
Posted on 05 June 2020, 07:40 by:   Mister.Ecchi    PM
Score +18
Thank you for the upload~
Been waiting~
Just in time for the weekend haha
Posted on 05 June 2020, 07:51 by:   MelmothTheWanderer    PM
Score +634
And then Fuetakishi suddenly remembered: "Wait, I was supposed to be writting a NTR story, wasn't I? From who were these two being stolen? Didn't they have a brother or something like that?" Proving once again his deep understanding of the genre.
Posted on 05 June 2020, 08:37 by:   dap00    PM
Score +44
I knew it would get to this point, I'm just surprised it took this long.
Posted on 05 June 2020, 09:31 by:   CDub7888    PM
Score +408
So even when they find out that they were being used and manipulated, they decide to just fuck him.

NTR would not be such a divisive genre if the characters portrayed weren't fucking retarded most of the time.
Posted on 05 June 2020, 11:17 by:   Nyarlathotep_1    PM
Score -100
Well, it's really a complex feeling.
It's not that I don't like NTR... Sanbon or Tsuya's works really have good and understandable NTR stories... And I can believe them... Love for big Tits? Fei and same Tsuya's works are doing good job for it.
But this.... It's beyond horrible or trash.
The art is good, sex scene are good... but the story and NTR... it just ruinnig everything. Girls just some random nymphos who fuck and fuck... and they don't care about anything else.
Without it it can be a good work, but with this... well, it would be not long before there are many same stories just cover it like a mountain.
Hope the 8 chapter will be last... It's not something I can wish for a good hentai.
Posted on 05 June 2020, 12:55 by:   Kuraiz    PM
Score +21
I want to see the bro becoming like takashi here and just also later on be a playboy who fucks nymphos
that woudl be funny
Posted on 05 June 2020, 13:55 by:   mrmai    PM
Score +10
so what with that bug on page49? and on the other chapters with it?
Posted on 05 June 2020, 14:07 by:   No64    PM
Score +15
Finally!!!!! Thank you very much for the translation. Now am waiting for the translation of Store Owner's wife. But am also happy about this. THANK YOU VERY MUCH
Posted on 05 June 2020, 15:26 by:   Kelsero    PM
Score +17
If your sister gets a boyfriend, is that NTR?
Posted on 05 June 2020, 16:20 by:   AtotehZ    PM
Score +38
@Kelsero It isn't unless she's "being stolen" in a way that would cause jealousy. I think this chapter comes closest to that. Earlier chapters however, not so much.
In fact some of the first chapters were pretty straightforward blackmail and the big sister giving into it. Not NTR at all.

The tag is also used when mothers are being corrupted and stolen at the expense of their kid, even when the mother is single.
Last edited on 05 June 2020, 16:39.
Posted on 05 June 2020, 19:01 by:   tearsax    PM
Score -100
I understand that netorare isnt about cheating, its about having someone you love (even if its not in a romantic way) being "stolen" from you and the dark feelings it induces, like for example a mother ditching his son for some cock, but in this series... Dunno people, but are we REALLY considering that the lil bro is being netorared just because the author likes to repeat one time after another after another after another that the shaved dude is fucking someone else sisters?
Press X to doubt.

@CDub7888
Bro, if the characters werent fucking retarded then NTR couldnt exist.
It already makes little sense with braindead character, If they had more than minimum amount of braincells to not chocke on their own salive, this wouldnt make sense xD
Posted on 05 June 2020, 19:48 by:   l337t3r    PM
Score +27
That's gonna be one interesting zoom call
Posted on 05 June 2020, 22:51 by:   vjbeal96    PM
Score -100
This is a series that needs to be put down for its own good.
Posted on 06 June 2020, 02:54 by:   father1    PM
Score +18
yummy! I am so loving this upload. All that is left is for the brother to see his two sisters being totally dominated by the bald kid and have his world get turned upside down. But on another note there was already another scene of NTR prior to this IIRC.
Posted on 06 June 2020, 03:52 by:   Twin182    PM
Score -100
This is the kind of NTR that is so fuckin stupid that I hate.It's fine that he wanted to fuck both sisters,they are hot as fuck so we totally get it...but why does he have to show it to her brother?His own friend?
That would accomplish absolutely nothing.He is just being an asshole for the sake of being an asshole.
Posted on 06 June 2020, 15:07 by:   seba19    PM
Score -100
Well at least at the end they did admit they were extremely retarded. It's like the author realized that this plot needed the dumbest of brains in order to exist, and now is apologizing about it.
Posted on 06 June 2020, 17:18 by:   Serverclosed    PM
Score +26
I don't like that much how all these female characters looks so similar but damn doujins are still hot as fuck.
Posted on 06 June 2020, 17:55 by:   BurnItDown    PM
Score +230
-> Wow we're so dumb letting him do this.

-> Oh well time for more cock

Lol. At least they're self aware
Posted on 06 June 2020, 21:29 by:   tearsax    PM
Score -100
Cant believe my comment was deleted LOL.

This series is such an obvious How to Follow Trends 101:
- "Now thicc girls sell better? Lets change my style and make my girls thiccer."
- "Now NTR sell better? Lets change my usual vanilla setting to NTR then."

I cant respect Fuetakishi as an artist, but i kinda can respect him for being a smart person.
Posted on 07 June 2020, 02:57 by:   vjbeal96    PM
Score -100
Really? Comment deleted. Point still stands. Lets see how it ends.
Posted on 07 June 2020, 07:18 by:   Nyarlathotep_1    PM
Score -100
Yeah, deleting comments that are not in favor to it... kinda strange.
It's one of the NTR that I don't like. I can read NTR, when we have good reason or a good background on it... But here we have two nymphos, who just need one stupid things: lower part of the bald guy.
Fuetakishi changed his usual vanilla to NTR... Well, and here we see, that he can't write it normally. His V-stories also not that great, but at least good for understanding.
Hope he change style of story back to his usual.
Art is still good and if not the story, I could enjoy sex scenes far more.
Posted on 07 June 2020, 10:58 by:   meshtigal    PM
Score +6
@mrmai

when I tried to translate it using google translate with the default "detect language" options, it translates into "Cordyceps Sinensis" which is the Latin name for "Caterpillar Fungus", and when I switch to the "Japanese" language option it translates into "Caterpillar". So I'm kinda guessing it has something to do with fungus in general since the bug shown in page 49 is being covered by fungus
Posted on 07 June 2020, 12:56 by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score +7
What can you say, atleast they are admit that they love his cock and don't care about littlebro anymore, how sad that is end right when i wanna see his reaction.
Posted on 07 June 2020, 23:09 by:   e-diver    PM
Score +25
thought this is already translated before. cant find the gallery.
Posted on 07 June 2020, 23:51 by:   robus77    PM
Score +30
You're all hung up on "what is or isn't NTR". So much so that it's making everyone forget the biggest fault with this work. This is a perfect opportunity to make the sisters go down on each other and earn that solid line yuri tag. But no, don't want to push it too far, this is a quasi-NTR story or whatever.
Posted on 08 June 2020, 02:53 by:   andhros    PM
Score -8
Clearly Bald kid is gay for the little brother and this is a long term plan to NTR both sisters and lock them away after mind breaking them in a basement where they will dream of him while doing yuri actions amongst themselves. Bald kid will demonstrate that he is the only one little brother can count on. Only real question is does he turn little brother into a trap or does he stay wearing male clothes.
Posted on 08 June 2020, 03:06 by:   MackDiesel    PM
Score +7
@AtotehZ I feel the tag's misused even for Netori stories (basically stories about someone being stolen but from the stealer's PoV than the the guy being stolen from with half hte time the latter being shown as undeserving of the girl)
Posted on 08 June 2020, 03:29 by:   tearsax    PM
Score +13
@MackDiesel if at least there was a netori tag...
Posted on 08 June 2020, 03:34 by:   suratkabar    PM
Score +9
@tearsax @vjbeal96 @Nyarlathotep_1
your comment will be deleted if you get too much downvotes
Posted on 08 June 2020, 04:06 by:   Leman519    PM
Score +6
"The truth is, sisters, the game was rigged from the start." BLAMx2
Posted on 08 June 2020, 10:56 by:   AIDSFART2011    PM
Score +96
greatest lovestory ever told.
Boy meets girl.
Boy sleeps with her.
Girl accepts it willingly.
Everything consensual.
The "main character" only has like 5 panels and i forgot he existed
Posted on 08 June 2020, 11:06 by:   bergil    PM
Score -66
@AIDSFART2011
Spoken like a true vanillafag

@suratkabar
Your comment becomes hidden not deleted if you get too many downvotes, though mods could delete your comment if they feel like it regardless if it's objectionable or not
Posted on 09 June 2020, 03:16 by:   AtotehZ    PM
Score +17
@MackDiesel I agree from an NTR perspective, this is weak NTR... but it's still a pretty hot story.

What's really gonna happen if he screws their brains out? Are they gonna forget they have a little brother? Are they gonna feel less brotherly love for him? I don't think either of the girls have displayed behaviour showing that. Then again, now is the first time they've both been on the hook at the same time and they're kinda the guardians/caretakers of the brother... We'll see if they neglect him. Him being "abandoned" would in this case be NTR.

@tearsax You should probably check out the work by this artist. They've been doing NTR mangas for more than 10 years and their style of drawing women hasn't changed drastically since then.
I do recall one or 2 artists that changed from vanilla stories to NTR, but only found out because the comments on the gallery was chock full of comments like yours.
Posted on 09 June 2020, 17:08 by:   vjbeal96    PM
Score -1
So im getting downvoted/removed cause, i say the story needs to end cause the writer forgot his own plot? That makes sense.
Posted on 09 June 2020, 19:07 by:   tearsax    PM
Score +5
@suratkabar
I know comments can be deleted by downvotes, but this isnt the case. They are being deleted by the uploader.
Posted on 10 June 2020, 13:07 by:   bergil    PM
Score -6
Since tearsax is a vanillafag cunt it's only normal for his comments to be deleted.
Posted on 12 June 2020, 22:23 by:   AtotehZ    PM
Score +30
@bergil Don't tell him that if his comments are actually being deleted, it's worse than he thinks. It's the moderators and administrators that are out to get him.
Posted on 15 June 2020, 17:49 by:   Rivers544    PM
Score +4
Anyone know if a part 8 is coming out or if it ends on a cliffhanger? This stuff is great. And yeah, the usual ntr haters be around but no matter how many times you tell them this isn't real or don't read, they don't listen. For all we know, the brother follows in his friends work and finds his own crew of sluts, lol
Posted on 18 July 2020, 16:04 by:   Trasgo-Artifex    PM
Score +6
If Fuetakishi for some reason make Baldy really helps his "friend" to meet some girls (Probably some other victim/sexfriends) and that help him to not depend so much on his sisters, and everything ending in a somewhat happy note.
That, even if it would be ver naive to hope for it, would be a breath of fresh air.
In comparison to the basic Ntr plot it already have, it would be outstanding.
Posted on 18 July 2020, 20:27 by:   Trombe1    PM
Score +17
This was one of the best chapters ever created 10/10.
Posted on 14 September 2020, 03:59 by:   Lolimaster    PM
Score +0
I can stay home with this much THICC MEAT.
Posted on 25 October 2020, 05:41 by:   typhoon17    PM
Score +6
Great artwork, but I don't like how lazy he's become with drawing faces. They have their eyes closed a lot when getting fucked. It's a lot hotter when their eyes are open.
Posted on 18 August 2022, 21:37 by:   Agent Bun    PM
Score +37

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