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(C96) [CORORI (Yopparai Oni?)] HANAKAN School Mizugi de Nande zura!? (Love Live! Sunshine!!) [English]

(C96) [CORORI (酔っ払い鬼?)] はなかん スクール水着でなんでずら!? (ラブライブ! サンシャイン!!) [英訳]

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Posted:2020-06-11 14:26
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Language:English  TR
File Size:294.1 MiB
Length:40 pages
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Posted on 11 June 2020, 14:26 by:   Enderleaf    PM
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Translated from Japanese
The translation was made by a friend, I just cleaned the text and added the translation

This is my first time editing and I look forward to do some more, probably focusing on Love Live! works
The English is probably a bit broken since the translation was a bit rough but feel free to comment anything weird you see!

This is the original work from where I got the torrent:
/g/1477004/7451ca1e4f/
Posted on 09 June 2020, 13:52 by:   mayuri9    PM
Score +1
Thanks a lot for you and your friend !! such a great work :D

I will keep waiting for your next Love Live translation > w <
Posted on 09 June 2020, 20:18 by:   Draugarnor94    PM
Score -12
Thank you for the translation of my scans. I am sadly not able to make cleaning and editing myself so i really welcome this ^^
I noticed a few parts for correction.

Page 20: On third frame the sounds she makes are: Uguu and UAA

Page 21 :You forgot the sfx sounds on the bubbles on 4th frame: "mnnn"

Page 22 5th frame: "Who would have thought that kunikida is such a pro at fucking" -> "This is a seeding/mating press for Kunikida"

Page 23: 4th frame "Oh. It is almost noon. You were supposed to be asleep here, so i will just contuine"

page 25 middle right bubble: Just a little more and i will come. Just leave the "be" away
Same section bubble on the complete left: "Why are you smiling so much?" -> "Isn't she kind hot?"
frame 5 3rd bubble: "This isn't something you should be shy about right?"

Page 28 frame 3 1st bubble: "Im going to cum cum many more times in that cute little body of yours" -> "I have let out such a bukkake on this cute little body"

Page 29 1st frame 1st and second bubble of the teacher: Phew: It is all gooey from sensei's medicine. I do not know what of it is semen anymore.
4th frame: I should be already over there anyway. It would be bad to not to show up.
5th frame 1st bubble: Then Hanamaru-kun, can i ask you to be my partner instead?

Page 30 2nd frame speaking box: Add to the "Maru has become sensetive due to the medicine. this "I have been blaming myself for it." It has been missing there.

Page 31 1st bubble: Sensei's medicine is still working, you can still go on.
Bubble on the other side of her head: Already (Mou)... Impossible zura... Two people how...
2nd frame 2nd bubble: The medicine is working excellent, Hanamaru looks to feel good, right?
last frame 1st bubble on the right: I came "in" your ass just now

page 33 1st bubble: "You really are not a honest child, are you? But your clitoris should be"
2nd frame 1st bubble: "What i did to her right now made her alive. I'm gonna cum inside this time"

4th frame: Be quiet. Recive it thankfully

Also, a tip. You used it on page 24 on the second bubble in the 1st frame. But it would be better to apply the white text border to any text that is going out of the bubble. It looks better this way when it does not overleap with the black corners of the bubble.
Last edited on 09 June 2020, 23:01.
Posted on 10 June 2020, 00:34 by:   curipepe24    PM
Score +4
Ta piola la webada
Posted on 10 June 2020, 00:43 by:   DiedrichVK    PM
Score +13
Page 8: Walked right into the imperial ambush. Same as us. And that Wooby over there
Last edited on 03 July 2020, 03:04.
Posted on 11 June 2020, 14:38 by:   Enderleaf    PM
Score +37
[UPDATE]
Fixed some edition errors and a lot of translations errors too in the following pages

8, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 28, 29, 30, 31, 33

Thanks a lot for pointing out the errors!
Posted on 12 June 2020, 04:47 by:   DiedrichVK    PM
Score -9
Please, for the love of god, let there be a sequel to this
Posted on 12 June 2020, 05:55 by:   FeranLachflash    PM
Score -9
@DiedrichVK
Write it under that comment of his that he posted today on his NSFW account.
https://twitter.com/onioni0101/status/1271270898352263168?s=20
If you cannot speak Japanese just write in english that you wanna see a sequel of his Hanakan book from last summer.
People need to push him finally to make sequels that he promised at the end of some books.

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