A translation of Okki's amazing doujin

Thanks a lot, but there's a couple of errors and awkward dialogue.

First one I noticed was on p.06: It should be "Pretending she didn't hear" not "heard".

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you seem to have typeset the downscaled resampled version instead of the full resolution raws unfortunately. Avoid that in the future by downloading full resolution either from the bottom of an image's page or using the torrent.

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Missing page 23, click here for reference.

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Amazing doujin, hoping for revised version with full resolution raws and grammar fixes.

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Why is she wearing two pairs of underwear though?

Why is she wearing two pairs of underwear though?

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"I don't understand how you can be this excited with a sweaty, chubby, and totally exhausted 0 HP girl"

Woman, I am BEYOND diamonds

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