I used CGrascal's translation as foundation. I tried to improve some odd-sounding lines , no guarantee though. (more than "some" but ignorance is bliss.)

Just write in the comments if something something bothers you too much needs to be fixed. I did not clean most sounds words because the translation can vary. Just learn some Katakana :P
It's my first project so don't expect too much.

Chapter 5 by Raknnkarscans: /g/1500815/0ede15782f/

Orginal Translation by CGrascal
Chapter 1: /g/1147683/b83a3ae737/
Chapter 2: /g/1151058/9ca914a73b/
Chapter 3: /g/1160194/b5da8aa5de/
Chapter 4: /g/1171762/70d8221b2a/

2020-06-18 14:40 EDIT: Fixed page 114 (removed a layer and improved redraw at the bottom of the page)
2020-06-18 23:10 EDIT: Fixed page 056 - 063 (cleaning color of the speech bubbles was a bit off)
2020-06-20 EDIT: Big grammar update along with other small fixes. Questions sound less casual though

Sorry for the (edit) trouble.

Since you're already at it, Why not just add in chapter 5 from the tank and complete the whole tank translations?

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Last edited on 18 June 2020, 08:02.

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Full Tachibana Omina tanks are always welcome
Surprisingly no shota this time around...
Thanks for sharing

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Man, that's one hell of a way to lose your virginity.

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Thanks for the hard work, although when it comes to cgrascal it's much better to redo the "translations" from scratch IMO.
Seems that most if not all of the cgrascal's trademark -offplaced question marks- remain unfixed along with the grammatical errors.
Anyway, much appreciated!

EDIT: Big thanks for all the fixes!

Last edited on 22 June 2020, 00:48.

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I'm open for criticism but you also need to be more specific. It would help me to correct the errors. I'm not that confident because english is 3rd language.
Now, about the offplaced questions marks...The question marks also appear on the raws, without question mark or wh- question words, in other words casual language.
You create a question by making statement and adding a rise in intonation. I could translate it as
a) Just a casual question b) Indication of surprise c) Casual question, some way of teasing

I thought it would sound more casual if I left it as it be.

EDIT: Fixed them, except 2 times because it just doesn't fit. For example "despite all these x ?"

Last edited on 20 June 2020, 18:58.

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@Dra-s
I'm not a Japanese speaker, but leaving those question marks in simply isn't something that is done in English. It's not a convention and it just sounds weird. The Japanese have a different approach to punctuation than English, so it doesn't make sense to leave it "as-is". Which is (one of) CGRascal's problems - he does leave them as is, has done so for 10 years or so, and it always sounds weird.

CGRascal is a much maligned translator for a reason.

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Thank you for taking the feedback and revising it, as well to everyone giving valuable feedback.

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@Hakrei

Well, we have a Shinji-kun MC now.

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Now thats a name I didn't expect to run into in the comments section.

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Harem page 212

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https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ202463/

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