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[Shirisensha] Futanari Gakuen Gekokujou Gijiroku (2D Comic Magazine Futanari Battle Fuck!! Vol. 1) [English] [Digital]

[尻戦車] ふたなり学園下克上議事録 (二次元コミックマガジン ふたなりバトルファック!! Vol.1) [英訳] [DL版]

Manga
Posted:2020-06-21 22:12
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:29.80 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:1065 times
Rating:
274
Average: 4.39

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Posted on 21 June 2020, 23:35 by:   coop086    PM
Score +21
this manga have deep mesagge is short but is very deep
Posted on 21 June 2020, 23:50 by:   Halja    PM
Score +366
She only won because her dick got bigger tho.
Posted on 22 June 2020, 01:22 by:   ncc1701z    PM
Score +86
thanks for the hard work!
an okay job for a first-timer. there's room for improvements however.

from a quick glance:
the font size and line spacing is too big. you don't need to try to fit the entire bubble.
also, minor grammar errors and typos all around.
basically small things that can make the reading experience much better.

it's a good practice to proofread by yourself before uploading. if you don't have time then try to find a proofreader.
keep it going, and many thanks!
Posted on 22 June 2020, 05:11 by:   crudebuster    PM
Score +77
Yeah that's the irony. All of it was just a dick-measuring contest and she was faking having a small dick.
Posted on 22 June 2020, 05:23 by:   红区之狐    PM
Score +9
咔咔,和这些虫豸在一起,怎么能搞好学院
Posted on 22 June 2020, 05:34 by:   deadeyemax    PM
Score +134
So having a massive shlong is indeed the correct path?
Posted on 22 June 2020, 06:28 by:   Runeless    PM
Score +75
Man, Jojo got weird in the later seasons.
Posted on 22 June 2020, 08:59 by:   Moonlight Rambler    PM
Score +80
My typesetting notes:

- This typeface is not very legible. It works, but simpler can be better in this kind of thing. CC Astro City is a common choice if you don't know what you're looking for.
- The spacing between individual characters is too damn wide.
- I think narrowing the space between letters would make this a lot easier too, but try to keep the lines about as long as each other if you can (especially important with bubbles big enough for multi-word-wide text).
- If you really *must* break up a word over multiple lines, at least use a hyphen (–) or something to indicate it.

For a first attempt it's not bad though overall. And I'm glad you didn't use MS Paint (I have seen that in the wild).
Posted on 22 June 2020, 11:24 by:   leftrightup    PM
Score +38
It's Teterun but reasonable.
Posted on 22 June 2020, 14:15 by:   Draw99Gray    PM
Score +37
F E R O C I T Y ! !
Posted on 22 June 2020, 16:58 by:   RigenZ    PM
Score +6
This is hilarious :D
Posted on 22 June 2020, 19:17 by:   spartwow    PM
Score +6
Looks like the final page is missing? I know there was another scene of them fighting.
Posted on 22 June 2020, 19:35 by:   omfgmule    PM
Score +81
Had her dick stayed at the same size though she would have lost, the president was right
Posted on 22 June 2020, 22:09 by:   blue penguin    PM
Score +65
Posted on 29 June 2020, 05:34 by:   AlphaOmega523    PM
Score +31
Small dicks are cute and underrated.
Posted on 29 June 2020, 09:39 by:   harghl    PM
Score +23
Riveting plot

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