Please excuse the rough text and translation, it's my first and I just wanted to see it translated! Hope it helps.

For me, more strange than sexual. Also, please use plain black text and a better font if you plan on doing other translation works, I would suggest the fonts wurmics bravo or anime ace.

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Good transpation, bad font choice.

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@kromdemon bad translation and font choice
I'm sure that if we think a little about the dialogues we can figure out what should be said tho

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With this baseline translation it makes everything else easier.
Wouldn't mind cleaning up the graphic of a translation like this, perhaps after someone also got a chance to go over translations again.
Wonderful progress.

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bad typesetting and cleaning

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PM me the PSDs and I'll fix up your work for you

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I actually have to strain my eyes to read that font

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oh yeah that font is pure cancer

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@foducool
Having to think about it pulls you out of it. I just end up looking at it like an English assignment rather than as porn.
But it's worse in this case. I feel like it's an eye test.

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