I'm not sure if I'm enjoying the story or my brain is having massive hemorrhage due to both spelling and orthography mistakes that is causing me to mistake enjoyment and suffering...and if I'm to be completely honest I'm not sure I want to find out.
@anrok: I agree. At best, this is a storyboard for a videogame proposal. It's middle-school level artwork, and the story is just basically a really bad rip-off of Robocop.
I don't know - it seems kind of funny in same way Robo Cop was. It's so bad it's good. I assume this was on purpose with examples like the "You're fired!" scene. Clearly a parody of the party - I mean corporate officer who got fired by the old man of OCP.
So wouldn't try making an actual game and selling it based on this. I'd be afraid of getting nuked from orbit by owners of Robocop franchise rights.