English translation of maverih345456's upload. Source link copied from their uploader comment: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ282812.html/?utm_medium=affiliate&utm_campaign=work_link&utm_content=RJ282812&utm_source=okashi.blog6.fc2.com%2F

(Also, I noticed the original was originally on the main site but is now available only on e-hentai- I'm not sure why or what was done exactly, but that might need to be done to this one too.)

This is my first time translating/uploading a work here- hopefully I'm doing this right. I took some liberties with the translation or left in Japanese terms where a direct translation would be awkward in English, which I *think* is a normal and good thing to do when translating stuff? Like, "big sister" sounds really dumb when moaned repeatedly, and what do you even do with "itadakimasu"? Hopefully it meets your standards anyway- please enjoy.

this is both cute and creepy. my pp confused

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Evil elves, where are the orcs when you need them!

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Go ahead and leave itadakimasu and onee-chan. Better than "thanks for the food", and definitely better than meme garbage like "rub-a-dub-dub, thanks for the grub"

I do empathize that the guy changing his personal pronoun from ore to watashi is practically untranslatable into english.

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thank you so much this is awesome!!!

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after saying watashi.. word he or now she totally changesx and her mind too?

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@unread
words are very powerful things
people have been known to change their entire personality by just repeating a phrase over and over again everyday.
Those in real life it can take decades.
this is a reason why there is an ongoing battle for control of the english language and why in nearly every debate/argument/online spat, for the last while involved what words being used mean and who gets to say what.

@Frygon
I think the changing of the color of the word I, from blue to pink, does a good job.

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On first few of his transformation he doesn't look like a child at all...
It's just on last few panel he truly looks like one?
I am sure that sex only change the hair or someshit.

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Loved this one, thanks for the English version!

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@masterzelda123 I think Frygon's more talking about when the other elves are telling the new girl to not say "Boku" and say "Watashi". If they just went with the pink colored "I" when the girls are saying "Go on, say Watashi", it wouldn't make sense.

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It makes sense to keep the Japanese 1st person pronouns here. The characters are EXPLICITLY talking about them, and there's no English equivalent to that.

Additionally, the protagonist's use of those pronouns are how the story establishes that they're 100% a woman now. It'd take some fairly drastic rewriting to make it work any other way.

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I was waiting for this to be translated.

Props to OP for taking time decorating text for the sake of context

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Once you check in, you don't check out

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I could’ve lived without the weird tree vore. Liked the rest of it.

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thx for good hentai

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I actually liked her more as a brunette I think.

Last edited on 12 May 2021, 06:18.

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