This is my first time translating a doujin
I used a few online translators and the basic Japanese I'm fimiliar with
There were a few which I couldm't understand
so if there any mistake please tell me
Thank you.

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Also ty for translating.

Do you know the author?
Also ty for translating.

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Also ty for translating.

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Also ty for translating.

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Also ty for translating.

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Also ty for translating.

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Also ty for translating.

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Also ty for translating.

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I appreciate that you made the effort (since nobody else had), but considering the poor typesetting/font choice and the weak quality of the translation, most of what is written could basically be guessed at without even knowing what the Japanese text read. Also quite a few grammar mistakes in here, too, but not a terrible first go of things.

I'd suggest looking up some guides to translation as they can tell you more about making things look and sound good.

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Thanks a lot for the criticism, really appreciate it BobDringus

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No ballbusting with this author?
welp isn't that noice XD

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thank you for translating.
can you do other untranslated MM also?

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>Your penis is hitting my spot
There's still hope

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A few small tips for the future:
- Make the text centrally aligned.
- Try to keep the speech text roughly the same size through the whole thing.
- Cartoony fonts, like Ink Free Bold, usually look better.
- Don't neglect punctuation. Even period.

Take these on and you'll improve very suddenly.
I'd have linked the typesetting guide I learned from, but it doesn't exist anymore.

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Just ignore all these grammar nazis dude

Great job with the translation!

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Am I the only one who thinks the women is normal sized and the man is a super Manlet?

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