This is a translation of "Tensoushugi no Kuni Kouhen" by Yamahata Rian-san (山畑璃杏), published on his Pixiv fanbox as a sequel to "Tensoushugi no Kuni", that was published in "Girls For M Vol. 20". You can find a translation here: /g/1563793/b2e4836d0d/

This translation is a collaboration between Esoteric_Autist and klow82. You might ask yourself: "why are you posting another translation, when there is one that just came out?" Well, we've been working hard on this, but the good ol' BehnamPersian beat us by a few hours (!!), so we decided to post it anyway. We made some different choices in the translation, so we hope that people will enjoy both versions. You can find BehnamPersian's version here: /g/1689731/22def910da/

Support the original author! Subscribing to his Pixiv fanbox only costs around 2$/month, and you get access to exclusive comics and art: https://yamahatarian.fanbox.cc/

Yamahata Rian also does custom artwork on request, on https://skeb.jp/@yamahata_rian

You can hit me up on Twitter @klow82 , where you can insult me for my choices of layout, translation, English, or ALL OF THE ABOVE :-D

Thanks for reading!

You're doing a great job mate. There are many S&M works out there that deserve to be translated, hope you give them a go. Really amazing work btw!

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That's why I don't touch any of the super popular artists. It ends up becoming a race and you don't even know how many take part in it.

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RAW: /g/1687620/3c6e752256/
ENG: /g/1689731/22def910da/
ENG: /g/1689949/5ccf8fc1ae/ (you are here)
ITA: /g/1690667/d42b24945e/
CHN: /g/1693031/53e541cde4/
KOR: /g/1746555/4def90833b/

Last edited on 02 October 2020, 15:24.

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Points you say? *opens cheat engine*

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I don't know which version of translate is more "original" content, I did read both version and IMO this translation is way better! However, I always prefer the translation closest to original text, because it is what author trying to tell in those scene.

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i love Yamahata Rian so much.

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Good morning. I hate women.

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