A pretty old Digimon parody by IKAMESHI (COMIC1☆12) that I translated quite far back.

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Base +7, ryuukami123 +12, Luke78 +12, Reid057 +7, Turbanator +6, PlayBoi Tiffany +4, 151132 +8, danielwain +9, facelessone +6

Hope we will get rest of the (COMIC1☆12) [8cm (Various)] EVOLUTION! (Digimon) translated as well!

Base +5, Givit +6

Poor Grammar tag requires a list of 10 errors per 40 pages. There are 7 errors in the 10 pages, 8 if you don't count the cover and credits, for a final rate of 28 or 35 errors per 40 pages.
Page 2: "Shutumon get caught by Calmaramon" got caught.
Page 3: "Come on, what happens to the spirit just a moment ago" happened not happens. "Did getting spank on your butt turn you on" spanked not spank.
Page 4: "Let me gives it a good look on how wet is it" needs a full sentence rework with something like "Let me get a good look at how wet it is". "If it's this soak, I don't even need a foreplay, I can just go in" soaked not soak and a before foreplay is unnecessary.
Page 6: "There's no way I can stop such an enjoyment" the wording is just weird maybe "enjoyable thing". "Come on, let me hear more of those scream" screams not scream.

Base +6, RangerKarl +6, HeavHo +12, gloriousstalin +6, Givit +6

thx brudah

Base +6

Rough grammar
p2 get caught -> got caught
good torture -> good torturing
p3 what happens -> what happened
spank -> spanked
pervert -> perverted
p4 gives -> give
this soak -> this soaked
p6 an enjoyment -> an enjoyable thing
scream -> screams
p7 insightly -> unsightly

Base +42, Glovelove. +19