machine translation rewrite + Decensor + color correction + a number of mods for this version.

original: /g/1657353/47ad92c68a/
my previous uploads: /uploader/Experigon

Edit: see my last comment.

excellent work. an actual translation of the previous two would be nice, but any good uploads like this are welcome regardless. thanks!

Base +11, GnHQ +17, FrankWeast +9, Bubblejum +6, Zenspy +6, aguy121212 +6, Amangel +6, Blank_1 +6, Phoenix_711 +6, Mister.Ecchi +6, smallestmoist +6, virado +6, JukanX +25, and 21 more...

Torrent pls

Base +4, swordpaladin -9, OnlyTheBestH -7, stalinisimus -6, Themonta -7, DoctorWorm7 -10, sasman -13, Jotame -7, RAGEOFAFRICA +7, dabrhe -6, The Really Cool Guy -9, Alteisen Riese -9

Fucking nice, glad to see his Kawahagitei's stuff being translated properly. A cleaned up version of the previous two would be preferable but if you want to just go straight for the fourth that's definitely appreciated too.

Last edited on 28 July 2020, 08:06.

Base +6, Bubblejum +6, FrankWeast +9, Zenspy +6, aguy121212 +6, qwerty5715 +6, yox4 +7, Novanity +7, electropol +3, Orengestar +7, fifou111 +6, RockmanZero214 +6, Tierno +6, and 4 more...

Is the second part actually translated? It seems like there's two poorly translated versions of the first part (and only one of them is "complete"). Don't see the second one here.

Base +16, Amangel +6, qwerty5715 +6, Shinji56 -6, Novanity +7, Megaton +45, 江泽ming +6, RubyRoy +5

Wait... are the other parts translated? can someone link them?

A proper translation of the 1st and 2nd chapter would be great

Base +9, xiaoxin20 +6

Why remove the ovary bulge tho

Base +7, bakabitch +6, meshtigal +6, captbob +6, alastor10 +7, AzureTime +6, stalinisimus -6, SCSS +19, FrankWeast +9, Tierno +6, JukanX +25, Mrroboto423 +8, neo_skyline +7, and 45 more...

@cyrukus @shamaLlama Looks like I mistook one of the incomplete ones for chapter 2 rip. You are correct it's just chapter one that's been translated. I'll probably end up doing chap 1 or 2 next, it seems to be more asked for anyway than 4.

Base +1, EvilSanta +6, qwerty5715 +6, captbob -6, AzureTime +6, yox4 +7, PawPad +10, 江泽ming +6, sgc_geh -9, relief9 +6, sasman -14, meshtigal -6

why not netorare ? WHY NOT NETORARE !

Base +11, EisakuOtani -10, EvilSanta -6, VetoHunter +7, Cynoire -6, alcantarilla -9, Commandfreak -6, bakabitch -6, qwerty5715 -6, fredfredricson -7, captbob -6, fappychubb -6, AzureTime -6, and 6 more...

I actually love the ovary bulges....

Base +6, bakabitch +6, captbob +6, stalinisimus -6, Xenon +8, Novanity +7, steelgross +8, PurpleSun +6, quizmoq +6, Megaton +45, blueperfection +7, Bubblejum +6, VanillaFaps +5, and 23 more...

Actual content editing aside from censorship removal should probably be tagged somehow. Would be much better if original representation remains available in a separate non-edited (but still translated) gallery.

Base +19, bakabitch +6, qwerty5715 +6, captbob +6, Zoreni +7, AzureTime +6, time0ut +6, SCSS +19, FrankWeast +9, JukanX +25, Mrroboto423 +8, Dynellen +49, GA3N +21, and 39 more...

The brother tag is only for yaoi content, brother/sister content is only tagged with sister.

Base +34, Novanity +7, qwerty5715 +6, Megaton +45, Tryndamere95 +11, Aelth +6, ChaseRaph69 +4, sgc_geh +9, anonymousMember +6

So I saw your edit note and I just have to ask. Why remove the ovary bulges?!

Base +6, AzureTime +6, captbob +6, stalinisimus -6, time0ut +6, FrankWeast +9, Xenon +8, JukanX +25, Mrroboto423 +8, ShinjiMyMan +6, alastor10 +7, Novanity +7, steelgross +8, and 28 more...

Look, the translation is appreciated, but please do not edit the author's art to match your preferences. You can hardly claim to be 'decensoring' if you're just censoring other bits you don't like.

Base +7, AzureTime +6, captbob +6, stalinisimus -6, time0ut +6, FrankWeast +9, virado -6, GuroLover12 +11, JukanX +25, Mrroboto423 +8, Cinj +6, kamisking +6, budgieboi +6, and 50 more...

You should probably try calibrating your monitor, because this color correction looks awful. Thanks for the translation, but please upload the a version without personal edits

Base +9, captbob +6, SCSS +19, FrankWeast +9, GuroLover12 -11, Cinj +6, budgieboi +6, ShinjiMyMan +6, alastor10 +7, Novanity +7, fox_qnoqxp +14, steelgross +8, Megaton +45, and 24 more...

Holy shit this looks absolutely fucking awful you should genuinely be ashamed of yourself for being such a fuckwit. The colors look horrible and you edit shit that is meant to be part of the story.
Either just keep it to translating the story or you can fuck right off because this does nothing but ruin what was an absolutely fantastic piece of work. You are fucking scum.

Base +6, stalinisimus -6, appletonoutcast -6, Tierno -6, captbob -6, GuroLover12 -11, Refuge -7, 1234waff -6, Cinj +6, Mugen no Saga -8, Bacon91 -6, StratosXZ -9, Novanity -7, and 5 more...

Well, a crippled translated version is still a translated version, so... somewhat thank you, I guess?

Base +6, captbob +6, GuroLover12 -11, Refuge -7, 1234waff -6, Mugen no Saga -8, StratosXZ -9, alastor10 +7, Rexarus -6, PawPad -10, Auhra -7, steelgross +8, mmx32 +6, and 12 more...

Well, other than the removal of content, this was a good translation.
People are bitching about the colors, but to be honest, I think they're fine. If I can get a translation with slightly more saturated colors, I'm happy to have the translation.
Some people don't respect that translation is a long hard process. Keep translating, but remember that like film adaptations of books, changing things will likely get you burned at the stake by fans.

Base +3, ShinjiMyMan +6, Mugen no Saga +8, Novanity +7, qwerty5715 +6, Bubblejum +6, mmx32 +6, badface +6, Rebel Ry +6, Shadow43661 -7, Tryndamere95 +11, Th3Ch053n0n3 +8, exxer +6, and 1 more...

@5328595 Experigon
>color corrected warmer.

Thank you for the translation, cleaning, redrawing, color decensoring, editing of translation into the images,
and QC. It's a lot of work and the effort is much appreciated.
For the altering of the image color palette to be warmer, that part is in error because of your monitor.
The original colors look warm on my monitor, but it is a business class monitor with ICC color profiles.
That is why any type of color work should be done only on calibrated monitors because if the monitor
is in error on the colors, undersaturated, oversaturated, or color-shifted, then the result of the color
editing would also be in error particularly for those people who have expensive monitors.

I attach no blame to you, so that is why I am just informing you. You already know deep inside
that monitors vary a lot in color whether you consciously realize it or not. As a reminder, you
can go to a place with lots of monitors such as Costco warehouse, Sam's Club, or some
other video store to see lots of computer monitors and TV monitors side by side with the
same images. You see how many of them vary in color warmth. Using such monitors can
result in off color results. Sure, the result looks good on _your_ screen, but it would
look overly warm on my screen.

By the way, there are low cost chinese versions of the video monitor wacom tablets used
for drawing and color composition. The low-cost $349 MSRP 22-inch one was marked up $499
by the chinese manufacturer when they realized they were underselling the marketplace. Ahh
price gouging. Anyways, despite the niceness of drawing on top of a video monitor tablet,
that chinese one has significantly poor color profile compared to the wacom. So if you do
any color correction on that chinese one, you will end up with "off color" results. Nevertheless,
it's cheapness means it's still good for drawing upon by anyone that dreams of using an
affordable drawing tablet. Just don't select your final color palette on it without using a
real and accurate monitor.

Thank you again for your translation, decensoring, and editing.

Base +18, qwerty5715 +6, Bubblejum +6, mmx32 +6, ioctl +14, DrKunze +8, Tryndamere95 +11, Tierno +6, sasman +13, Th3Ch053n0n3 +8, ChaseRaph69 +4, sgc_geh +9, Novanity +7, and 1 more...

It's basically just 10 pics repeating itself. Don't you get bored translating this?

Base +6, Sumwunspecal +6, stalinisimus -6, captbob -6, Bubblejum -6, catdrag0n -17, Tryndamere95 -11, Shirihina -7, Tierno -6, sasman -13, sgc_geh -9, neo_skyline -17, ADIN0 +2

@darkxxx27

You must live a very sad existence devoid of very much social contact...

Base +5, captbob -6, Auhra +7, gokogt360 -7, steelgross +8, Aelth -6, mista TEA -6, sasman -13, anonymousMember -6, Zelinko -9, Ishimanian -7, sgc_geh -9, neo_skyline -17

Nice to see a good TL unfortunately the crazy overboard color corrections runes the look a simple leveling of the black and white a few points would have plenty. her skin is practically bright orange instead of looking realistic

Base +9, captbob +6, stalinisimus +6, steelgross +8, mmx32 +6, C4th0de +8, catdrag0n +17, Tryndamere95 +11, bigeat12 +7, Aelth +6, gearsky +6, Novanity +7, Zelinko +9, and 1 more...

@darkxxx27 do the TL yourself then retard. I genuinely wish you nothing but bad luck for being this much of a choosing beggar lmao. Some of you idiots need to realize that even as bad as the tl, edit, or color edits are, it is still a translation, which is miles ahead of the original for people who cant speak moon, no matter how bad it is.

Not flaming this tho, honestly the color aint that noticable for me, granted the first 2 poses are a bit off but I got used to this. Barely any grammar mistakes and tbh although yes, you probably should expect to get shit on if "censoring" (rather more like changing) the og work, tho crying over 2 extra bulges is kinda petty. Anyway, good job translating an almost 300 page behemoth

Base +6, Kinzoku -7, steelgross -8, Xenon -8, Estel37 -8, mgran52 -9, captbob -6, Minstrelofmoria -6, ioctl -14, Shadow43661 -7, DoctorWorm7 -10, Tryndamere95 -11, sgc_geh -9, and 2 more...

I like ovary bulges tho...

Base +6, steelgross +8, PurpleSun +6, blueperfection +7, ghost_of_sanakan +7, TBTBTB +6, Bubblejum +6, Xenon +8, BiBaraLover +6, captbob +6, mmx32 +6, gearsky +6, Rebel Ry +6, and 11 more...

Thanks for the job but: why edit the ovary bulges and belly bottoms tho?
Would love a proper translation of the previous two chapters, especially the second one since I can't find it on the page anymore.

Base +6, steelgross +8, PurpleSun +6, Megaton +45, blueperfection +7, Bubblejum +6, Xenon +8, captbob +6, mmx32 +6, C4th0de +8, gearsky +6, Rebel Ry +6, Mrroboto423 +8, and 8 more...

please do a cleaner version of the other 2 first before doing the next chapter

Base +6

I would hold off on working on Chapter 1 as it seems like it is already in the process of being redone.

Last edited on 28 July 2020, 08:20.

Base +6, ScrawnyJohny -6, Aelth +6

I'm sry, but i can't help but laugh at some of this translation

Base +1, Aelth +6

Edits: Made inflated belly button smaller, removed ovary bulges, color corrected warmer.

You did remove something that is the point and fetish of this artist ? That's not a good move let me tell you.

Base +7, glaug -7, C4th0de +8, ElectroYume +12, captbob +6, Kinzoku +7, Tryndamere95 +11, sasman +13, Th3Ch053n0n3 +8, wiow +6, Jotame +7, Aelth +6, gearsky +6, and 21 more...

Much appreciated, good to see someone translate his works. Feels like most shy away from it for the sheer length. Will totally follow you if you begin to transfer his other untranslated chapters.

But somewhat along with the others, I personally feel the edits were unnecessary. You clearly have very good editing skills but I feel like it uses a lot more of your time on these projects, that could be put towards another chapter, that will likely be unwanted or unappreciated.

Base +1, captbob +6, Tierno +6, wiow +6, Tryndamere95 +11, gearsky +6, ChaseRaph69 +4, r4d6 +6, Bubblejum +6, Novanity +7

Any chance for a version without the color correction? I love the rest of the work.

Base +6, captbob +6, Aelth +6, Tryndamere95 +11, gearsky +6, Bubblejum +6

On the sight of [decensored], I knew there was a possibility of 70% that it's decensored by DeepCreamPy.
*Yeah, but I'm sure DeepCreamPy can't handle this.
And I wonder how to decensor pictures.

Last edited on 17 October 2020, 03:02.

Base +2

I feel bad for the dude who had to clean the train and toilet lol

Base +7

will you decensore more of kawahagiteis comic (this series mostly) and also include your amazing edits?

Base +6, Killfuck Soulshitter -5

@tsxor Correct, it's not deepcreamPy, that program is kind of limited although it does sometimes have it's uses.

@hentailover223 Probably not, certain parts of the kawahagitei fan community kind of killed any passion I had for this kind of hobby. I would have de-censored this entire series by now if that hadn't happened and posted the various other versions of this I was in the process of making including a de-censored raw. I still have like a dozen unfinished colored and de-censored mangas from other b&w manga creators too, but I just haven't found the interest to touch them.

The thing is that I'm actually a b&w colorist and de-censorer and typesetter primarily and would have been open to collaborating as I don't enjoy translation. Instead I got: browsing and finding people insulting me in other threads and then finding hate filled messages in my PMs. It's just not something I wanted to deal with and still don't.

Last edited on 11 February 2022, 13:40.

Base +5, steelgross -8, Alteisen Riese -9, alberto ramirez +6, Killfuck Soulshitter +5

can you decensor the other chapters?

Base +6, Killfuck Soulshitter -5

@hentailover223 No. Previous comment explains why. I only came back recently and have somehow already seen the community being cunts to new hobbyists. Nothing seems to have changed and that stuff just isn't for me.

Last edited on 11 February 2022, 17:04.

Base +5, steelgross -8, Alteisen Riese -9, alberto ramirez +6, Killfuck Soulshitter +5, neoncamo +6

@Experigon

Don't let a bunch of faggots and cocksuckers deprive you of what you like to do, this place is full of those kinds of retarded fags, keep doing what you like, and remember their anger and hate is equal to the size of the bad dragoon dildo they have stuck in their asses

Base +7, neoncamo -6

really hope the complete series gets uncensored and this gets included

Base +6

@Dyuoron: Are you trying to make a point, or are you just projecting your own insecurities onto others? Because I'm sure it's the latter.

@Experigon: Quit pretending to be a victim. You're removing something that isn't considered to be part of censorship.

Base +8