Thanks for checking out my first translation. I had some trouble deciding on if I should redraw and clean the whole thing, or just do a basic translation. I came to the decision that no one really looks at the sound effects anyways, so it wouldn't be worth the trouble. I actually do have the first few pages finished already, but opted for this more straight-forward style in the end. Anyways, I'm glad you took the time to read through this, seeing as how I've never done this before, criticism is always welcome.

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great doujinshi it is， looking forward to more masterpiece created by this author

Base +4, Zuoshiyu2333 +6

thanks for the hard work!
not bad for the first time, although i think you should make line spacing more consistent between bubbles.
sfx is usually depending on the editor's preference, so if you think doing the sfx is not worth the time, then it's fine. however it can sometimes add depth to the reading enjoyment.
looking forward to the next ones, and don't stop improving!

Base +17, NoNameNoBlame +34, Ralmari +6

Thank you for the translation.

Base +10

Half-expected Marisa to grow a dick at the end.

Base +6, Konola +7, KKoinen +6

Wait, draining the dick actually worked?

Base +6, Zuoshiyu2333 +6, Broomstick Vilian +7, KKoinen +6

I really enjoyed this doujin.
It's not a new premise, but it was still funny to see the awkwardness unfolding.
Much as I wish it was vaginal and not anal.
I've always preferred vaginal MUCH more over anal.
You still did a great job translating this, Ralmari!
Thanks for this!

Base +13, Broomstick Vilian +7, highnass -5, Konola +7, kimo_ -5, Flan-chan -18

It may be a little clichéd, but I will never be upset to see some enthusiastic anal sex between people that like each other a whole lot.

Last edited on 10 December 2023, 07:45.

Base +6, Broomstick Vilian +7, Konola +7

They never solved the mystery of why she grew a dick to begin with.

Base +7