My second scanlation, please enjoy. The formatting and readability should be much better. I also translated a bit less literally to make more sense in english.

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Thank you very much for the translation, this artist has some very hot material

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Definetly an improvement when it comes to typesetting. There's still some minor typos here and there "dispair" being one. I would still recommend using the ASCII heart as it looks better and it is what is used in the original work.
Great job! Hopefully we'll be getting more translations, you don't know how much I appreciate these.

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I'm gunna keep rollin for sure. I couldn't get the ASCII heart to work with any of the fonts I had or I would've

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I appreciate you so much for doing these! <3

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Page 5 spitting some mad truth.
I love these releases, please keep them coming.

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It is a little hard to tell who is saying what in some of the captions and some of the lines seem like they are from the wrong perspective. I was puzzled by the "hahahahaha" line as well. I feel like there was an emotion to be conveyed with the laughter that did not make it to through translation.

Art 6. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. Translation 4. All out of 10.

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Hilarious this gallery's been disowned like a tranny son lol

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