The typesetting leaves stuff to be desired, but it's far from terrible. And I know redrawing can be a pain, that's why most people just avoid it all together. Nice work.
I'm a bit confused as to why it's called "Unfinished", despite having a clear ending. Other than that, it was pretty good, and the translation isn't too bad. Some mistakes here and there, but at least it's legible and mostly understandable , which is more than can be said about some translations out there.