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Cyclone's artstyle is so beautiful, such a shame I can't really enjoy them cuz they keep doing these horribly terrifying rape scenes

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And then Fudo brutally, terrifyingly murdered Dr. Ver for fucking with his test project during the period that asshole still had hope for Tsubasa.

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Yay another cyclone work translated, i hope one day we can read all the Nanoha doujin from cyclone
Thank you

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@Noche --> I can make really that happens faster than anyone here since cyclone is one of my favourite artist, if you can just help a little bit with the patreon, I would really appreciate it and keeps me motivated.

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I want Tsubasa and Maria yuri!

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@3381405 Majala
Do you have a separate person do quality control before release? The english grammar is a bit stiff in some places. A good QC person catches all the typos, rough grammar, text styling, and even spacing situations. I'll make a few QC comments below on some of the images.

Image #4:
"The anti-linker gas prove to be...." ---> "The anti-linker gas has proven to be...." since he's using it to suppress symphogear.

Image #6:
Add exclamation point after "What you you doing... you fiend". You may precede the exclamation with a question mark as many other doujin translators do, but it's not necessary.
-- https://www.thepunctuationguide.com/exclamation-point.html
-- https://www.dailywritingtips.com/when-is-a-question-not-a-question/
Move the ellipsis in "That's not how you sing ..." to follow immediately after "sing" instead of a separate line. ex: That's // not how // you // sing....
Add period after "That's what I want to find out"

Image #7:
Some editors would break up "I want to investigate the phonic gain...you just made" into two sections to more fully fill the long black shape. ex: I want to investigate the phonic gain upsurge. // Keep giving me more of that voice you just made. Anyways, put a period at the end since it's missing now.
"That burning hot gasp" probably needs an exclamation point. For optional style purposes, put each of the 3 clauses on a separate line.

Image #16:
Did you mean to say "I'll just have nobodies" // "do this duty on my behalf." ?

Image #19:
"I can rub her bookb" should fix the typo in "boobs"....

Image #21:
"You can get really ERECTED..." <-- Your wording also suggests it is the guy being erect, but he actually seems to be teasing Tsubasa by telling her that her nipples are really erect in an embarassing situation. <-- I usually see "position" used instead of "situation" but that choice of wording is up to the authors' styles.

Image #22:
Change that wording to be "....this room will really stink."
Change "I'm cumming to cum now." ---> "I'm going to cum now."

Image #23:
Change "If this is a noise...." ---> "If this was a noise...."
"Getting rape a human being" ---> "Getting raped by a human being..."

Image #26:
Add comma after "middle-age man"

Image #29:
Change "dumb" to be "dump"

If you need QC or help in reviewing before release, please visit the EHCOVE subforum (Cove of Scanlators) at e-hentai forums. They would be a lot more detailed than I am in these impromptu comments.
https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?showforum=81

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@Anime Janai
thanks for your effort. I'll look up proof-readers for my future works.

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doctah veh, the last ntr hero

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