Overall a nice design; she looks like she could be a goth girl type. There are only four main elements that I could see that need attention: First, the coupling under her arms really needs to be smoothed out. Second, the peak of her hair is too high; without the hair, her skull would look like a giant egg. Third, though the breasts appear to have movement, the areola/nipple area's facing should be more in line with the direction the breasts are resting. Some natural breasts are quite firm, but they wouldn't be shaped like hers, and therefore there should be more of a pronounced 'squish' to her breasts when she's laying on her side. Lastly, and this is really just a nitpick, but the tan lines between the top of her breasts to her collar bone should be more faded out; because of the size of her cups, the straps of her bikini would not likely be pressed closely to her skin in those areas. The tan line fade between her breasts is perfect. Keep up the good work!