Posted on 19 December 2020, 00:51 by: hardwonpeace
Score +7
I THINK this chapter takes the cake for my favorite futalife chapter so far, except for maybe chapter 1 or 2. (At time of writing, the most recent chapter is "Chapter 10: Saucy at the Supermarket".)
It's not as actively sexual as some of the other chapters, but somehow that just makes it even better. I love the dynamic between Jennifer and Natalie. The setup at the start where it begins with Natalie's fantasies and then gradually becomes real is really clever, and I love Natalie's personality through all of it.
In contrast to the other commenters, I'm actually relieved that Emily never discovered what they were doing. The plot is all about them getting away with more and more unlikely escapes, and if the librarian had discovered them and simply joined in, I feel like that would've completely invalidated everything they had gotten away with thus far. It's so much more satisfying that the characters had a clean escape like that. Emily's hot, yeah, and she really doesn't know what she's missing, but hey, somebody's gotta be the antagonist. Maybe her character can appear in another setting? Hell, I'd like all of these characters to appear again, but if it comes down to a vote I'd definitely vote Natalie.
Great work on this one, Manjimus. These non-fantasy chapters are my favorite for sure.