https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ293576.html

RAW: /g/1684118/d33f5726b2/

Translator: Svx
Everything else: PawPad (Me)

Was gonna finish this up tomorrow, but then saw someone else beat me to punch. So I though I better get a move on and finish it up now. If there are any spelling or grammar mistakes, just let me know and I'll fix them.

Also, how do you guys feel about the word 'Baka'? We've translated at as various things over the doujins (stupid, idiot, dummy) and normally I think that's fine. But when you elongate these words like on page 10 (08_ENG), it always sounds weird to me. IIIIIDIOT, STUUUUPID, DUUUUMMY, never really have the same ring to me as BAAAAAKA. But then it seems weird to not translate that one word. Maybe I've just listened to too many tsunderes insulting dense protagonists, but there's a BAAAAAKA version of that page at the end if you want it :)

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I feel like some form of this happens in real life. lol

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@1544837 PawPad
>how do you guys feel about the word 'Baka'?

I've seen it informally used so much that it loses effect in serious situations. In those cases, saying it in English form such as "You fool!" would have more impact on the reader.

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I prefer BAKA, just like I prefer ONEE-SAN, sounds more natural.

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Awesome work. The ideal solution is to simultaneously have "baka" voiced and "idiot" subtitled, in other words, a doskoinpo anime... Hey, I can dream, can't I?

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Nice, thanks for releasing it even earlier. That other translation he posted was pretty bad. Makes it even clearer what a great job you guys always do, Svx and Pawpad; thank you.

As for your question; I think "baka" is fine since it's a word understood by pretty much 100% of people here. Kinda like I prefer "onii-chan" instead of "big brother".

Last edited on 09 August 2020, 09:23.

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Dicklet Dance Time

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To Dear Svx: thanks for your work!
Just have one question:
as for translation in the upper right corner of P28, according to the raw,
Maybe "those kids who have no sex experience cannot escape neither" is better than "after their first ejaculation.......escape me again"?

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Doskoinpo does it yet again

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