I was intrigued by the art and tried translating it. It turned out to be sadder than I thought. Originally, we tried to color it but turned out we weren't ready for that yet. I hope you still can enjoy it, have a nice day! :)

Confidential TL
Credits to:
BigBro000 (translator + type-setter)
ZeroEmpathy (editor + cleaner + proof-reader)

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It hurts...just a bit...

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Dude, no pls no, dont go that route, just because senpai disappointed you, you dont have to go the same route. Dont continue this endless circle of sadness

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Thanks for another Rewrite bro.
By the way after skimming through this, I wish you did use google translate because it somehow would probably be better than you.

raw link so you can see the raw and check the "translation" for yourself.
/g/1340645/a8b4641454

The rest are way worse, so I'm only gonna list out the mistakes on the first few pages because it's bad enough already.

Page 3, Panel 5:
She's like a painting a masterpiece // she's beautiful
> She's beautiful, almost as if waiting for someone // to draw her into a painting. (how did you change the meaning is just too beautiful way better than Jk Rowling.)

Page 4, Panel 2:
"You and Izumi-senpai are members of the art club, aren't you?"
> Don't "what" me. You like your art club's Izumi-senpai, right?

は！？ち。。。ちげーよ
somehow got morphed into "Yeah, so?" (Not gonna give a fix for this if you made a mistake on this line I suggest you should re-learn japanese before translating ever again.)

"She has an adult charm"
>Well, I do understand you. She gives off really adult vibes.
Missing translation. (can't read handwriting, huh? Not a surprise. Don't worry, if you know japanese you can read jp handwriting.)

Page 4, Panel 03:
I liked her but I decided to give it up.
>But you should give up.

Page 4, panel 6:
Eh? Where are you going?
>Huh? Are you going already?

You don't have club activity today, do you?
>There aren't any club activities today, so are you stopping by the arcade on your way back?

I just want to clear my head.
>I'll be doing some practice on my own.

Page 5:
Everyone is just envious
>Everyone just says what they like.

I also don't know what kind of person senpai really is (missing meaning too)
>... I've only gazed at Senpai from afar, so I don't know anything about her...

Page 8:
How cute...// Am I that interesting? ( you somehow misread 面白い into 可愛い)
should be something like:
>What an interesting kid you are. // Watching someone like me...

Last edited on 09 August 2020, 16:46.

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interpretation, she was lactating, I imagine she disappeared because she got pregnant and dropped out of school, with some other dudes baby.

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"DAYUM, ... Dat's Some Deep Shit!" And if one is not careful, the cycle is about to take place again.

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most suihei sen work is always lactating even not pregnant

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@dankestdungeon

I think you misinterpreted 'interpretation' as 'rewrite'.

A rewrite would be if he changed them to be brother and sister secretly having sex in the art room.

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