TL: Nishimaru
Commission: dash-guzman
Upload: me

TL Note: "I worked on this while I had a migraine, so let me know if something's off."

Hope your migraine has gone away, thanks for the translation.

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Yess thank you i've been waiting for this.

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well at least he got to know his supposed childhood friend was an easy woman...

still though is that bald guy really asking to get eventually stabbed or something, planning to do the same thing on the same person.

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@Imuyaoi

Sure but he's got NTR guy plot armor so it's all good

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oh shit I even forgot this group exist, its been a long while.

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damn that was a good baby making sex lesson.

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There is no hope for the guy. He refuses to learn from reality. So of course he's going to get cucked again.

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This is actually pretty different from the average NTR. Bald guy Tetsu actually played the long game and pretended to be a normal person to Ayaka. Usually the NTR male just has abnormal sex skills and the girl just submits. Here it's a combination of magic sex skills and actually pretending to be a decent human being. It's a real novelty. With some clever editing and removing all the scenes with the other guy, it's possible to make this into a vanilla lol.

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I guess it's needed to have this kinda plot, but what a dumbass MC.

At any point he could've talked to her about how this guy is a bully, his bully.. and how he treats girls like trophies to be shown off. She did not seem to be a girl who'd take kindly to that.

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MC knew what he was doing to her and didnt try to do anything. He deserves it.
FMC knew what kind of dude she was dating. She deserves whats coming to her.

Tho if i was the MC i also wouldnt have told that bitch anything about what was going on on her back LOL

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Ntr requires the most mental gymnastics and and suspension of disbelief when reading because sometimes I just cringe at the story and how much of a wish fulfilment it is.

It requires a pussy mc and and a butt ugly Chad who no girl wants to be with either due to appearance or personality.

It's just irritating how much of a coward the mc is and how we're supposed to pity him and then the realization that were supposed to be him in a sense is grating because there's no way a normal guy would let shit like this slide.

I dislike projecting but Ntr really wants us to feel the pain and love it.

Honeslty none of the characters are likeable and I am baffled by how stupid they are.

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The story is similar to SS-Brain.

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@reignengine Thats one of the reasons i think netorare become a flawed genre with the past of years.
Theorically, i mean """theoretically""", netorare is a genre where you gotta take the role of the MC and feel the rush of anger and fustration he is feeling, but as time passed and netorare works kept getting more a more generic, MCs kept getting dumber and dumber and there is no freaking way in hell anyone is gonna pity someone as retarded as them. On the contrary, when you are as retarded as them people starts thinking they deserve it LOL
Thats why for the past years netorare just became a genre where people sees themselves as the chad. In other words, turning netorare into some twisted netori.

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@reign I don't agree with that. Sometimes it doesn't even require any ill intentions. Other times it just requires a lack of morals by 1 or 2 people. Their appearance doesn't really factor in.
There are legitimate ways MC can be cucked without the girl having any fault in it, but they're very rarely explored. It's usually some kind of weak blackmail or the girl being loose.

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This has a novel as well apparentl

So she’s preggers now... we’ll I mean she seems to have realized what she’s gotten herself into

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Oh look a Cotton House ntr. I enjoy their works quite a lot. Hope more of their works get translated. Thanks for this.

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Nice! Thank you for this! Hope somebody will eventually complete the Sonokoro, Anoko wa series.

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Oh... well, I really want to see an NTR story that ended with protagonist get revenge on antagonist and protagonist on the winning side in the end. I know some of them in the past, but there is so few of them and I already forgot the title. Aw...Man, ... I already tired and bored of seeing the NTR story that ended with the antagonist's victory.

Last edited on 13 August 2020, 04:03.

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Pretty sure she was going to let the child hood friend know she didn’t like him as well? But I mean she knew about his feelings for a while either of them should have said something

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Can we all agree reignengine and tearsax are butthurt, self-loathing, incel bitches who love sucking each other's cocks? I mean I don't see any other reason why they keep bitching about the same things under almost every NTR hentai that is posted even though they clearly don't like the genre.

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Now i wanna read this novel and see if there is at least a bit of regret.

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They’re working on part 3 too I can’t read Japanese and and machine trans aren’t helpful but it seems it’s going to be the end of aya’s story and feature a Makiko hen?

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It's nice for what it is and all, but this isn't really NTR because the kid's feelings don't really matter when he isn't and never has been in a relationship with the main girl. This is just bullying and nothing else. The boy should've at least been dating the girl prior to the bully, chad or whatever you want to call him, stealing her away from him, regardless if he ever had sex with her or even kissed her while going out. Everything else is fine.

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@Krnekdo Nowadays there is no longer any need for them to be in a relationship to be considered NTR. Its all about the feeling of jealousy of someone you love (doesnt even need to be a romantic love, it can be a mom, sis or whatever) being "taken" by someone else.
Its pretty stupid since the word netorare ("neru" means to sleep and "toru" to take) basically means "the person you sleep with sleeping and being taken by someone else" xDDD

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@tearsax Yeah, and that's wrong, which is why I pointed out the misclassification. It really shouldn't be classified as NTR when the MC isn't in any kind of relationship with the girl. He might as well be some bystander who's in love with girl x, she exchanges greetings with him at some time, an occasion that has never happened before, literally makes his day, yet unbeknownst to him, she's fucking a group of men in the school storage room during recess. That's simply not NTR in any way, shape, or form and it shouldn't be classified as such because it only serves to further mislead people into believing incorrect information. In the case of this specific manga, I believe that the antagonist has an unhealthy obsession with the MC and is either purely malevolent, hellbent on making his life as miserable as possible and deriving as much pleasure out of it as he can or a complete psychopath who wants to "befriend" the MC, but doesn't know how and is jealous of the girls that he approaches or those that approach him. I wager that we'll eventually find out if there will be a 3rd or 4th part, if he fucks the MC in the ass. Regardless, not NTR.

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@Krnekdo
You didn't need to write such a long-ass post to prove you don't know what NTR is.

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Seeing the comments has gotten me curious. Do most people read NTR with the intent to project onto the cucked character? Does no one take satisfaction in seeing the "antagonist" dominate so utterly? Or do the people who project onto the other characters in NTR works simply don't voice their opinions?

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@UnlimitedBlades I'm just here to nut.

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This story have too much drama. The felling of angst with Baba manipulation was fun but the story have too much drama compared to erotic content.
I believe the goal of netorare is to invoke the feeling of jeaslously and anger. To achieve this i think is necessary for the story to have a feeling of injustice: protagonist does everything right but it still not able to accomplish his objectives. Baba have magic manipulation and kouta don't do anything so there no feeling of injustice.
Maybe this story would work best if the protagonist was Baba? This story is in a uncanny valley where is not netorare and not netoru.

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@ UnlimitedBlades
You should stop projecting your insecurity it's not healthy.

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@bergil
Hahaha, possibly yes! But here in hentai land we're all out for a good nut one way or another.

My comment was mainly motivated by curiosity. Out of all genres, NTR seems to be the most heavily criticized in the comments. Often times these criticisms are 1. MC too pathetic, I couldn't sympathize with him. or 2. Antagonist too scummy/unrealistic, why no police etc etc.

Even straight up rape doujins get less such criticisms despite being in the same vein, and there's a lot of overlap between the two. It made me wonder why sympathizing with the view of the cucked character is largely considered the norm by many commentators. My guess is that it's just those people most upset who complain about those issues. Maybe the plight of the protagonist hits too close to home? I wouldn't know, but I think asking is a start to finding out.

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Thanks for the overall job !
Before your release, I did use app translation on japanese and chinese version and sometimes the text is diffrent from yours.
Example : end p34/beginning p35
Baba : Then, let me in.
Aya : Uh...
Aya : No...Wear a condom
Baba : I don't have
Aya : I...I brought it
Baba : You are very well prepared
Baba : Senpai is very motivated
Aya : No, it's not...
Aya : It's just in case... Just like before...
Aya : Because sometimes you don't have enough.

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As of august 29, they started working on part 3 no release date yet though

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Compare to his previous work, i think bald guy will trick her to have sex with other people and that bald guy will fuck this new woman instead.

@RaizelX
How can I find his update? I went to the link in 2nd last page(dlsite) but got no where.

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@goflog

Answering the question. The author's ci-en, https://ci-en.dlsite.com/creator/6294/article/362274 , no pics or anything though, just the announcement.

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Thanks for the upload
and
@ UnlimitedBlades
I totally enjoy ntr just to see dudes get their girls stolen, there has always been haters of ntr, but the past few years there have been people constantly complaining about how much they hate the genre, but cannot stop going to every ntr hentai just to jack off to it then rant about how much they hate the genre.

I think the worst part about this is how there are people who try to misconstrue the tags of ntr and putting crap like "cheating"/etc because it just makes it harder to find ntr works that are just hidden because these guys wanna jack off to ntr but don't want to admit that it's ntr.

edit:
if you've seen my comments on other ntr stories I should clarify calling these commentators cucks, as you can see of some of these guys saying no normal guy would put up with a chick like her, or how unbelievable ntr is because of all the mental gymnastics, don't you find it strange how they are exactly like the mc in the stories where the mc doesn't like the fact that their girl is fucking a dude, but they can't stop jacking it too ntr hentai while complaining about how much they hate the situation?

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A spoiler.
https://media.ci-en.jp/private/attachment/creator/00006294/c81f91387c24e73feaeef74df35f6b79ebc4bd7b3c50e3bec03db432b6666f22/image-800.jpg?jwt=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJrZXkiOiJqd3RhdXRoX3NlY18yMDIwT2N0IiwiaXNzIjoiaHR0cHM6XC9cL2NpLWVuLmRsc2l0ZS5jb21cLyIsInN1YiI6IjAwMDAwMDAwMDAwIiwiYXVkIjoiYzgxZjkxMzg3YzI0ZTczZmVhZWVmNzRkZjM1ZjZiNzllYmM0YmQ3YjNjNTBlM2JlYzAzZGI0MzJiNjY2NmYyMiIsImV4cCI6MTYwNTU4ODMyM30.vPztaDvx_AiSNikcApeQm-I1Djaslmx4fajf5fAV64c

Thanks for luckcrazy for the updated link :)

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I think what bugs me most is, this guy has had the same bully for years, and Aya thinks that's his friend?
Now I don't expect the guy to tell her, as that would be humiliating.
But if you know anything about a person you've known for years, it should be who they do and don't get along with.
And if you can't read a person's body language when they're around someone they hate to that degree, you're probably not really their friend, either.
Does she really think her friend chose to walk into a classroom in his underwear? That's a story that should have a tendency to get told a lot.

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If anyone notice, three guys who work in hotel look similar to three guys in Ntsp story.

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