[Marmalade Mum] Chemistry Class [Ongoing]

Posted on 14 March 2019, 04:25 by: pikachuifan

You have my interest

Posted on 14 March 2019, 04:34 by: Raevelyn

looked interesting, but then they played fartnite so that's a no.

Posted on 14 March 2019, 05:19 by: primeemu16

I sense ntr. Seriously im calling it here.

Posted on 15 March 2019, 21:35 by: asdfest

primeemu16 should change that username to Nostra-fuckin'-damus. It was day one!
Boys we fucking called it. It's NTR time. The salt barriers to deter NTR didn't work.

why the fuck would you spend 9 months and 40 pages setting up an NTR comic lmao
artist is also pretty salty about readers begging that nerd-bro doesn't get cucked so that's funny as well
following is for analytical purposes: (4.73)

Last edited on 05 January 2020, 07:43.

Posted on 26 March 2019, 01:59 by: bahamut_256

Fair warning, this will wind up with futas and animal transformations. Its the authors favourite fetishes.

Posted on 24 May 2019, 08:49 by: Ringeling

Oh boy. She's going to use genesplicing to get bigger tits and end up as a cow, isn't she?

Posted on 25 May 2019, 15:12 by: S.Skygazer

@hoigoigoi

No, the artist decided to throw color pages behind a pay-treon paywall.

Posted on 24 July 2019, 20:52 by: ZetaFate

Detailed transformations (I.E. she's becoming a cow, can't eat meat) is the rare gold that keeps me coming to the tf fetish

Posted on 30 August 2019, 05:50 by: Rayquaoxys

I'm gonna have to call bullshit on this most recent panel. Loving and caring boyfriend tells girlfriend, who he recently injected with experimental hormones and has been experiencing rapid body changes, to let him know if something happens. He then receives a phone call from her in the morning, in which she is panicking and her voice is slurred and there is CLEARLY something wrong... and he just tells her he's babysitting and that he'll come over later? Without even giving her a chance to calm down and explain that she's literally turning into a cow?

I'm sorry, but OOC much?

Posted on 19 September 2019, 23:12 by: Marima

So he gives some girl an experimental mutigen, she calls you in a state of panic while barely being able to speak properly, and he just brushes her off because he's babysitting.

What a cool dude.

Posted on 23 September 2019, 05:47 by: Sign Painter

>Get close to the sexy moments people had been waiting for.
>Decide to start adding backstory panels instead.

Posted on 07 October 2019, 00:09 by: HikariNoKitsune

Bleh... I hate it when comic artists do this... create comic, and then decide that something needs to be backtracked on or some exposition needs to be had about something, and so they start putting in filler stuff instead of simply continuing the story... making it stupidly annoying because you see the comic pop up in the feed, so you think 'OH! NEW STUFF!' but you go to it, see the last couple of panels and go "wait, there's nothing new..." cause you see same couple of panels at the end point repeatedly.... then you go "wonder if i'm just missing something' so you look and see the page numbers have in fact been increasing... then you notice 'well shit, they've been putting stuff in the middle of the comic, AFTER people have ALREADY been reading it!'....

Get the story straight from the get go.... if you have to go into some 'well maybe I should explain why I want to be so curvy', then you should have done so prior to making the other panels.... or, just finish off the scene that's currently what people are waiting to see completed, THEN add AT THE END of that scene, the flash back...

Also, why are there so many 'flash back style' scenes? I mean, the very beginning STARTED OFF as a 'flash black', and now you're having flash backs inside of flash backs....

Posted on 22 October 2019, 22:00 by: Firedon

"No to anything after page 30"
"Judging by the rest of the artist's content, it looks like she'll grow an udder"
Do you people not remember the first page? We already know what endstate of the transformation looks like. Which yes, does include an udder.

Posted on 19 November 2019, 00:47 by: Loki The Flameshield

What the fuck? She got so angry for no reason. He asked if she wanted to look like that and she just flipped out on him. That argument was so forced it should appear in a rom-com. I honestly feel like I skipped a page.

Posted on 20 November 2019, 06:58 by: thatguy90210

This feels like it's leading into NTR territory, and so abrupt too which just kills the mood.

*hitting page 37*
My interest: "Aight Bro I'm Boutta Head Out"

Last edited on 22 December 2019, 08:30.

Posted on 08 December 2019, 06:31 by: Lerianis

I'm not liking the plotline either.
The whole "The girl is upset because the boy is horrified at what he did to her!" seems very out of place. Any female who had that happening to her would be more upset that her boyfriend was NOT concerned by her transformation, not that he told her "I'll find a way to reverse this!"
Unless the girl is so focused on the boobage here or the transformation is sapping so many nutrients that her brain is not working properly at the current moment.

Posted on 08 December 2019, 06:56 by: Laughingmann

She dramatized the color right off the page!

Posted on 09 December 2019, 00:02 by: Loki The Flameshield

Seriously, this artist if this artist trying to make me hate Alex, they're doing a bad job, Cassie's being completely irrational. Then again, maybe that's the point. That what happened to her is making her irrational. It is better than forcing the male character to be a dick. I always hate when artist do that to justify what happens next.

Posted on 10 December 2019, 06:12 by: Zarys

What a forced conflict, would make sense if she was angry at him for doing this to her but she's almost angry just to be angry and probably kicking off the only dude she knows who may help her.

Posted on 15 December 2019, 11:53 by: Macharius41

Wowee another abrupt flashback, what a treat.

Posted on 22 December 2019, 01:22 by: Southerner703

This was a fun read for a while, but it's starting to get pretty old with the flashbacks and attempted vindication or whatever this is supposed to be. Apparently glasses need has had a crush on her for a while but she ignored it until it was beneficial to her to date him, or she had no other options due to lack of popularity. Whatever the case, these flashbacks that were assumedly supposed to justify her decision and hatred for nerd boy are only going back on the original perception that they were both outcasts and found some kind of respite in one another. The author is, I guess, trying to make the nerd kid being booted make sense to completely brush off the possibility of NTR but at this point I'd genuinely prefer to see that than this.. mess. I'm assuming I'm not the only one following this now just to see IF anything happens rather than when. Good art, fucking atrocious attempt at story.

Posted on 22 December 2019, 10:31 by: AverageEE

Oh my god, what a bitch.

Posted on 22 December 2019, 17:15 by: Loki The Flameshield

That is one awkwardly placed flashback.

Posted on 10 January 2020, 05:10 by: Pantswithoutpants

liking the main girl less and less as time goes on

Posted on 15 January 2020, 15:04 by: Rayquaoxys

So the girl convinces her boyfriend to step out of his comfort zone and go to the dance, and then promptly decides to leave said dance herself with another boy without even waiting for her boyfriend to show up because "heels hurt".

If the purpose of everything that's been happening is to make me hate this girl's guts, then it's succeeding. If its anything else, the author has no idea what they're doing.

Posted on 21 January 2020, 17:17 by: Talnar00

The artist is obviously drawing out this story to siphon as much patreon bux as possible from their "fans".

There was hardly any point to the whole romance build up, except to draw out the story, or to purposefully make most of the readers upset with ntr.

Could've just started with page 1, with the backstory being the girl trying out the cheerleading thing getting bullied, her looking up this stuff herself and it going "horribly wrong" into the cow transformation since she doesn't know anything about this stuff. Easy transition from that into her being a cowslut, but no you have to set up a decent little romance only to sucker punch anyone who liked it with surprise out of nowhere out of character NTR, while also heavily delaying the porn and tf aspects of the story. Fuck this artist.

Posted on 21 January 2020, 19:31 by: MitchellTF

Yeah...this is a perfect example of a Bait and Switch comic. It started with a nice cowgirl sequence, though with some stuff that's annoying...

But, now it's just an NTR comic...and not even a GOOD NTR comic. (As it relies too much on a flashback that undercuts the characters...much like Cap is Secret Hydra...)

Posted on 22 January 2020, 10:05 by: Fadedbackground

And the story has officially hit WTF mode! So it starts as a girl connecting to a boy who are both social outcasts. Girl wants breasts which boy reluctantly helps. We get a first flash back to explain her low self esteem but introduces another boy who is seems like a predator but gives girl some confidence. Then we comeback to the present where the girl is making no sense pushing the boy who has loved her for her away. They we get another flash back where the boy is in deep and girl is with the predator. And if he isn't a predator why does girl need bigger breasts. I mean I want to see how it ends yet it seems we'll be too confused to understand the end.

Posted on 22 January 2020, 11:13 by: magicalstring

Aaaand it's NTR. Shame, I hoped it would be good.

Posted on 23 January 2020, 04:29 by: Rayquaoxys

Aaaaaaaaaaaaand I'm done. Fuck this comic. Bye folks.

Posted on 24 January 2020, 14:38 by: AverageEE

Funny how this storyline just gets worse and worse with every new page.

Posted on 29 January 2020, 04:39 by: thisisadisplaynameok

Holy shit just turn her into a cow already

Posted on 13 February 2020, 07:40 by: Sign Painter

All of the backtracking and flashbacks were so unnecessary - the author literally just needed to change direction from NTR, to MC injects himself with the same thing but for bulls and everybody is happy.

Posted on 24 February 2020, 07:45 by: MitchellTF

*Sighs* And I actually liked this comic specifically FOR Cassie being kinda geeky, and her interactions. They were cute.

Posted on 08 March 2020, 03:38 by: MitchellTF

Part of the problem with NTR is that it legitimately feels like her character is schizophrenic. She goes from 'reasonable human reaction' to "I HAVE BOOBS AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I CAN FUCK ANY GUY I LIKE!" (Like, they don't reveal Terry until...25 pages in)

Posted on 08 March 2020, 05:45 by: lokkkas

I've completely gone from "oh cool a new page" to "hoo boy lets see what's going on now" with this series

Posted on 08 March 2020, 20:17 by: Tristail

And what do you know, now she's a complete slut. And for some reason no one cares that she's literally turning into a cow.
I was right to abandon any thought of thinking this comic could redeem itself, but I didn't think it'd actually try and succeed in making itself worse. I'm starting to think the artist made this story as a way to vent out their frustrations, because there's been no way to take this story seriously for a long time.

Posted on 16 March 2020, 02:40 by: The_Thong

@inchide - Yes, we all knew the outcome of the story, that is true. Problem was the story, at least to me and some others, baited us with good characters and a believable relation between the two main characters. However, what it turned into is not what the first pages led us to believe and it took a turn for the worse, which is still spiraling.

Posted on 05 April 2020, 00:53 by: Maxlol

What's up with western porn artists lately? This is the third comic I've seen from a western artist in the last couple of months that starts good, cute and even wholesome and then the artists decides "drama and bs=complex story and characters" and the whole thing goes downhill. I'm not against the artist trying to get better at writing stories and characters, but I'm hating this trend of taking established, liked characters and stories and then doing a U turn just because "I want more realistic stories" (That's what one of the artists I mentioned said when asked why they made the protagonists break up and go full NTR in the span of like 3 pages).

Posted on 25 April 2020, 00:52 by: Darudius

And of course the artist introduces the stereotypical black man with a huge dick to continue with with the NTR trend and the story going to SHIT. I've not got a problem with NTR but come on this is getting silly now and the story going to the dumpster doesn't help.

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Posted on 25 April 2020, 02:19 by: ciln

Story sucks, the only good part is the artwork.

Posted on 25 April 2020, 07:06 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"Who's been eating my grass! You think a good quality football field just happens?"

Last edited on 25 April 2020, 07:22.

Posted on 09 May 2020, 09:34 by: Macharius41

Hold the fuck up, did the coach only just realise that she's halfway turning into a cow? Is he blind? Is everyone at the school blind?

Posted on 19 June 2020, 19:01 by: biznizz

@losaa

The very beginning of the comic she was a cow getting fucked by someone (who was initially thought to be Alex). That's not the issue.

The issue is that she essentially dumped Alex for a bullshit reason, was shown in flashback that she was unfaithful, then went on a fuck spree that didn't turn any heads other than "Huh, that's a bit weird..."

So it's hard to tell if her going fuck crazy is more influenced by her natural personality or her changing biology affecting her mind.

Posted on 24 June 2020, 16:08 by: TVGuru1234

Ah she finally turned into a cow. Now I can ignore the story and fap.

Posted on 15 July 2020, 23:06 by: Tristail

Went and skimmed through this again after...honestly, I don't care how long it's been. I just want to get this typing over and done with.
The story's gotten even worse in terms of NTR since my last comment. Like MitchellTF's comment said, Cassie is acting like she's forgotten how to act human at all. At this point, she's a complete cum-slut.
Alex doesn't seem to exist in the story either. For the majority of the story, it's just been about Cassie whoring herself off to everyone at school. It feels like the writer decided "Okay you know what, I hate Alex now. Get rid of him and make Cassie a slut."
There was absolutely no regret seen from her about yelling at Alex after her partial transformation, and throughout the rest of the story she doesn't even spare him a single thought. In the beginning, it was implied that this story was about Cassie and Alex, and the two of them exploring her new transformations together. But that was a trap to lure you in. In reality, the story is about Cassie becoming a mindlessly horny and disgusting half-cow slut, fucking every guy — her age or older — that she can get her deformed hoof-hands on.
What's even more disgusting is how the story baits you into this story, never warning you of its netorare until it's too late. Back when the story first started changing for the worse, the netorare tag kept getting put on and off because we didn't have any clue on if it really was becoming that kind of story. Now it's permanently up there for all to see.

If you're a reader that reads comments before delving into stories, then please read the following tips:
1) IF YOU ARE DISGUSTED BY NTR, DO NOT READ THIS STORY.
2) IF YOU READ/FAP TO STORIES WITH GOOD WRITING, DO NOT READ THIS STORY.
3) IF YOU DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOUR BONER, DO NOT READ THIS STORY.

Thank you for reading, and I hope you find a much better story to fap to. Unless you like this bullshit, in which case power to you.

Posted on 20 August 2020, 18:52 by: Mad Spectre

This is not male:netorare unless she fucks the brother so good she steals him away from his girlfriend. This is definitely female:netorare though and is not marked correctly.

Posted on 25 August 2020, 04:51 by: Squirreldoctor

You know, if there was no guy who liked her at the beginning of the story whose only purpose is to get used/tossed, and she had done this to herself, there’d probably be no problem with this comic. No massive backlash against the artist. We’d all be (more or less) fine with it and would be slapping out meat (or flicking your bean if you have one of those instead) to it and everything would be fine.

Posted on 26 August 2020, 04:08 by: EpicLPer

Yeah, tbh the artist completely butchered this comic midway through. Start over with the story about where she suddenly decided to fuck a bunch of random guys she finds and make it less weird by doing so, then I may give more stars. But as it is now it’s a total waste of time to keep hoping for more.

Posted on 15 September 2020, 13:27 by: extiji

first you had my interest, now my attention

Posted on 22 September 2020, 04:12 by: khaazam

cant upvote anymore lol

Posted on 09 December 2020, 19:51 by: urlgrey18

This is a teachable moment to other porn artists out there: no matter how good your style or attractive your characters, if you bait-and-switch with the premise like this people will hate it. I'm still sad at the wasted potential of this comic.

Posted:	2020-08-16 23:58
Parent:	1704867
Visible:	No (Expunged)
Language:	English
File Size:	291.4 MiB
Length:	74 pages
Favorited:	5556 times

language:	english
artist:	marmalade mum
male:	big penis dark skin glasses human on furry netorare teacher
female:	big vagina blowjob breast expansion cowgirl furry multiple breasts paizuri sole female tail transformation
other:	comic replaced

Rating:		1450
Average: 4.56