Raw: /g/1710403/897e862755/
Korean TR: /g/1710463/0dee97aa53/

Some very nice views in here - p. 9 has a great one from behind, p. 17 has x-ray, and p. 19 shows how it all ended. Good stuff, thanks for sharing this!

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Thank you for the super fast translation, Jalter is love <3

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Misleading cover :(

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This one needs a lot of fixing. (Welp might as well be another rewrite.)
Just gonna list out a few mistakes for now. Sigh, "fast translation" just means rushed job nowadays, I shouldn't have kept my hope up. There are more, but I might as well redo the whole thing at that point.

Page 2, 1st panel:
Master~ do you want to have a date with me tonight? I'm free anyway
this is a command, not a question. Should be something like this:
>Go out with me tonight, Master! I'm sure you're free anyway, right?

3rd panel:
I'm sorry... I can only see him today.
>I'm sorry... I'm borrowing him just for tonight.

Page 3, 4th panel:
A 30 years old whiskey...
>That was a 30-year-old whiskey...

Page 5, panel 1:
What the hell! All I'm asking for is just a hug...
>What are you talking about!? All I did was look after you...

Page 7, panel 5:
That's something we can't help with holy water... I'll cleanse it myself
>I guess I've got no choice but to cleanse it with holy water for you.

Page 10, panel 1:
ウザイ somehow got morphed into "Cumming!"

Page 13 panel 1:
"Amazing... Master's cock is throbbing, inside me..." (dunno how you got this wrong, even though his dick not even inside yet)
Amazing... Your dick's so stiff... Hurry up and put it in...

panel 5:
"I'm sure he never did such a thing with that saint..." (this one is just a 180 degree rewrite)
>I'm sure he did this with that saint, too...

Page 14, panel 1:
"Master is just really lucky... having a saint at day and holding me at night..."
>Fucking a saint during the day and fucking me at night... You really don't have any decency, do you?

Last edited on 18 August 2020, 06:38.

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@dankestdungeon, thanks for pointing out all those mistakes. Guess I still have a long way before fully understanding Japanese... I think a better translator will make a rewrite that everyone can enjoy.

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This one needs a lot of fixing. (Welp might as well be another redraw.)

Page 1, the cover:
I was expecting bondage, but it's nowhere...

All other pages:
Where is the bondage promised on the cover?!

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Ending was nice, took a smile out of me =)

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