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pg.28

so cute so I had to seriously do raw penetration many times over
she was complelely (sic!) raped by 2 men for that long, so she still inside fainted
ah! you took the video?
no way, so much creampie

.. That's just the tip of the iceberg, eg

pg.15

"your face is more fermenine"
^ does that stem from fermenting?

Personally I don't mind, one can read it anyway & I'm happy about any translation, but to call this "proper" (while also writing "the existed translation" in the same sentence)... is a bit off.

Base +6, JukanX +25, SuperGenericAnon +8, Kimikoi +6, Boshima +7, newmn84 +9, TCJJ +9

Rough grammar
p5 for telling -> for tellling me
isn't it -> doesn't it
p7 quite a trouble -> quite troublesome
p8 caused a scene -> cause a scene
p9 come into -> comes into
you got -> you've got
p10 -chan -> -chan's
espace -> escape
p11 beauttiful -> beautiful
finger so I'll -> finger. I'll
p12 I never did -> I've never done
p13 you never had -> you've never had
use it -> use them

Base +42, Glovelove. +19, TCJJ +9