Oh no, a horrific twist! This is a pretty clever way of doing mind control. It doesn't seem common in mind control stories, but I also haven't read many.
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wish this was longer it all kinda just wrapped up in the last three pages which feels a bit rushed, would be better if it had a few more pages at least five to have some build up.