Circle (Artist): Yukikagerou (KANZUME)
Raws from: Longsworduser ( /g/1395796/a8716b897b/ )
Translated by: Behind the Ramen Shop Translations (Me)
Requested by: anon >>>/vg/296175318

Here is the REAL translation with less awful typesetting. Key phrase: LESS AWFUL.
My experiment failed. Oh well.

Fuck, I just noticed an error I made on page 6. Okki is supposed to say that the INN's time stopped, not looped (even though the the doujin says that BB made a time loop a few pages before).

Looks pretty good, arigathanks bro.

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imagine the smell...

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Would look even better with leveled scans. It's painfully obvious to me that you didn't level your scans. Here's a guide on how to properly level scans: http://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/1.html#3.

And as a bonus, I've even taken the liberty to level a page so that you have an idea on what your project should look like: https://puu.sh/Gs5I6/93b71fd587.png.
This literally took me less than 5 minutes, but made that one page look infinitely better.

Also when translating SFX, try to give them English equivalent SFX, because nobody knows what the fuck "Gubopo" or "Shubo Bucho" (on page 10) is supposed to be, but most people know what "Splurt" and "Gush" mean.

@B9HtUkYLEfS Here's a couple of pages for editing resources, since you're serious about improving (which is more than I can say for 99.9% of e-hentai posters):
https://discord.com/channels/616922698626367488/616929720944033793
https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?showtopic=68725

E-hentai is super-packed with scanlators, most of which have questionable quality. If you want more people to notice your work, you have to step your game up and deliver a quality product. Otherwise, you'll get lost among the crappy scanlations out there. And for fuck's sake, no more fucking experiments on this site. There's enough shit on e-hentai as is, and that other gallery made you look bad, stupid, and incompetent, which are 3 things you don't want to be known for as a scanlator. How do I know all this? I'm an editor for a top-flight scanlation group called the Little White Butterflies, and I'm speaking from personal experience.

Last edited on 13 September 2020, 00:15.

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@THDragon Thanks, I have read a few guides, but I am still clearly an amateur. I'll read that guide you posted. I just went with whatever scan had the highest resolution because my brain registers "bigger resolution number = better" and I don't really notice things like how level pages are. As for the SFX, I couldn't find it on my regular resource (http://thejadednetwork.com/sfx) so I just winged it out of frustration. I had another resource for sfx that had other SFXs, but I lost it when I switched PCs.

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"fuck reddit*****s"... Oooooo...k?

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since you don't mind suggestions, let me cast my vote for the gessyu murasaki dj

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@KuroXIII Sorry, I don't like Murasaki. The art does not really "hit that sweet spot" for me either.

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Page 8 lmfao. The artist acknowledges his small dick?

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Dunno why, but the Nani the fuck enhanced the other version.

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reddit deserves it

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damn, worth a shot i guess lol

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Damn, this was actually pretty funny.
It was a bit stereotypical, yes, but well-written.
Plus, it was a sexy Osabekihime pleasing a hung Gudao.
Damn, do I envy Gudao...
I loved how the Hotel tossed them out.
Thanks so much, contributors!

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>anon playing all the nep games for the 10th anniversary
your cool guy

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Damn, I wish my dick grew along with all the singularities I completed.

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pg. 15 misspelled receiving.

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Little tip for superimposed text (ex: pp.1-2) - if the background is almost uniform, you can use the Spot Healing Brush or Clone Stamp tools and then do slight touch-ups if it's not a perfect job. It'll look infinitely better than blurring out stuff.

Also recommend picking up redrawing as a skill. It comes in very handy for this type of text.

And please don't do "joke" translations like the other one anymore. There's enough lazy, garbage translations out there to weed out - if people start doing this shit ironically, it'll be a nightmare.

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The heck was this "experiment" even supposed to be?

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Rough around the edges work, but I love Kanzume and Fat Hairy Neet + Big dick is pretty fucking good, thanks.

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Thanks dumb /alter/fag

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The cutest Okki doujin i've seen. Love her plump body

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Replacing the old translation: /g/1731325/2ee9038584/

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This look really suits Okki IMHO - hairy and plump, with huge thick boobs.

Last edited on 30 May 2024, 09:47.

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