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Posted on 22 September 2020, 06:34 by: aj_the_wizard
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Good to see you back! Love your work.
as for suggestions:
Personally, I'm not as into the wild sci fi tentacle brainwashing pregnancy stuff as much as the previous stories that were more based on character personalities. That's just personal taste, though. Even though /Does A Body Good/ had a cow lady & a witch and stuff, they were still characters, rather than faceless writhing monsters. Hell, it could be fun to see a faceless writhing tentacle monster that had a distinct personality. Maybe play up the whole ridiculous campy pulp sci fi angle and have it, like, gesture with it's tentacle and do charades while the girls try to guess what it;s saying. Maybe there's a special effects failure and the mask falls off the costume or something. You know old Godzilla costumes, how the suit actors get sort of respected but sort of anonymized? you could have something like that. --- Also, idk if this is a suggestion, but I don't quite understand the deal with the characters being porn actresses and the stories being fictional in universe. I feel like the characters don't quite have strong enough personalities that they're recognizable in different settings. I would love to see more scenes of them just hanging out and interacting and showing off their personalities if you're going to emphasize that aspect of it. --- as for stuff I like, not just criticisms, I like the sort of self-aware angle. Like the characters are aware that this is ridiculous but they're still having fun anyway. I would also love to see more textless pages, or simply textless variants of the story. --- Have you read The F.U.T.A. series by SquarePeg3D? That handled an erotic ensemble cast with action and physical comedy mixed in very well. The story was even kinda good at some points.
--- For cosplay ideas: Mario & Princess Peach Bayonetta Doomguy Terry Bogard & Mai Shiranui Morrigan Aensland Ryu & Chun Li Master Chief & Samus Aran 2b & 9s
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Do you have a twitter or something, or do you just post here?
Nice to see this. Usually in scenarios like this the futa's the one orchestrating all of it and usually has her way with the victim. It's rare to see them be the victim and it go as far as birthing as well.