Edit* - Fixed some dialogues
Edit* - Fixed credits page

It's been a while, guys! The final chapter is finally here, It's 268 pages and the longest I've ever made. (Maybe I should have split it into 2 chapters...) Nonetheless, I hope you guys find the story interesting and the art appealing. I believe the art has improved since then but I'll let you guys be the judge.

As for story-wise, this time round I got help from my friend Devi Lacroix. Do check out Devi's social media sites as well.
https://devilacroix.com/
https://www.patreon.com/devilacroix

As usual, I'm looking forward to your feedbacks. Thanks for reading!

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AWESOME!!!! Love it!!!

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有点乱。。。。变来变去就开始脸盲了

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I will admit that I do love what you did on your art style. I do apologize if I sounded harsh on your last chapter about the art, but I do like what you did before and now if you do a comparison. The background shading and the atmosphere been done excellent. I would suggest that you look over how the character's shadow is done because when someone with hawk eyes (like me) noticed that the shadow is not as dark as it should be when a character is standing near a bright light source, then it becomes somewhat jarring. For example, look at page 266 and 267 and see where the sun is facing and even if the floor is a reflective surface, the shadow must still be pronounce enough to notice as I preferred it to be like page 265. Page 38 was somewhat jarring when it comes to the mist or glowing mist. I can't tell if that's supposed to glow or not and the corrupt power on the character's body makes me scratch my head to figure out if those are supposed to glow as well. The story is progressing quite well; however, remember to not rush through the story since I feel that the heroes are being corrupted a little too fast, but it's nothing to be alarmed by since we are talking about world domination. The ending was sort of rushed, but it's good. I do enjoy your story and I honestly think that you will become someone great if you continue down this road as both a storyteller and an artist.

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I read this and wonder if The Fallen Star will ever be finished.

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I find the art superb. Great work and thank you very much for publishing it here for everyone to see and enjoy!

The story, I’m not sure to get it in full. Perhaps I should reread the previous chapters to remember some details. I’d suggest a page “the story so far” alongside the faces of the characters involved. Just a suggestion.

Either way, I fapped like an adolescent. Nuff said.

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Amazing you out did your self again TY for all your hard work here !!! cant wait for the next one :)

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I would love to see the tentacle corruption in pages 115 and 119. Especially if the youngsters would corrupt their senior.

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The work is splendid, however, maybe there is something need to talk about. The female character is powerful, that's just fine, but maybe their appearance should be a little more charming or feminine? The appearance you show us is more like a demon with violence and tyranny, especially their armors. Queen of the domain is just ok, but we hope she has a more lustful appearance, and too much male elements will make her more like a male demon, not female, maybe enhance their woman elements and weaken some male elements, such as muscle or something else could make us more enjoyable cuz you know we all have fun in objectifying females hah and when those succubi have some male elements, I have to say that their charisma has disappeared in some sense. Just for a suggestion hah.

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@Unknown Guy
Thanks for taking the time to look at each and every detail. I'll take note to check the shadows in the future. :P

@cozzy121
I hope Shinra finishes TFS as well...

@Foralin
Perhaps I really should have done a recap. Thanks for the suggestion.

@greekmikef
The focus for the chapter was Otillia, the archangel, Ueri, and the mastermind Arlena, I skipped most of the fodder characters in this chapter so I can potentially get back to them in form of side stories.

@anotherSkyrimer
The archetypes for this story was more amazon-ish, it was intentional to reflect their barbaric nature. Ueri started off more feminine and ended being more built to reflect her fusion with Orozauth,Reza and the brute. I understand it's not everyone's cup of tea which is why Arlena and the rest had more feminine appearances to kinda balance it out.

As for everyone else, thank you for taking the time to read. I'll see you guys again in the future with my next story. Cursed Artifacts 2 may be a possibility but it won't be my next comic.

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全员二五

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No torrent download?

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There are two Chinese comments. One is about messy change causing hard recognition. Another says that anyone can be betrayers.
I cannot agree them both more hahahaha.

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@Verinis
Yes, I could get the difference between Ueri and Arlena etc. I did notice that you add more feminine appearances in Arlean and strengthen the male element in Ueri hah. Anyhow, this is really a masterpiece and hope you could get further!

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Hey man, love your work, Shinra's Fallen Star seems to have been an inspiration for you.
Have you considered giving it a shot at finishing his saga if he never comes back? I think you would do a really good job with it.

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@Greenson
It was kind of over the top...

@Qtronic
Indeed, TFS got me started. As for finishing his saga, I don't think it's right. It won't be the same if it's not coming from Shinra himself.

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This was really good! Keep it up

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跪求汉化.....

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