Commission that was entrusted to me, sorry for the grammar, I'm still studying English

Don't worry and the doujinshi is cute

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No need to apologize for the grammar as you are still studying English. Note that as time goes on, people might not give you as much leeway when you post more content or translations.

If you do wish to practice your English, one way could be to translate your older works that have already been uploaded here, which might make it easier for when you post some of your more recent things. I could recall many of your past Naruto works that I really wished were translated into English.

Last edited on 25 September 2020, 12:34.

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only ooc trash Hinata would never chear on Naruto and Naruto would never cheat on Hinata

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"I cum!" "I cum also!"

Untranslated Japanese panels, half spanish, half english with bad grammar. If you had asked just one native English speaker "Is this good English? Does it sound right?" They would have told you what translations needed correcting and you could have fixed it together. Having a native English speaker look at your translation before you release it is an easy step that should not be skipped.

As to the comic. The art is fair. The kinks are good but the delivery is a bit weak.

Art 4. Plot 5. Sexiness 6. Translation 2. True to character 5. All out of 10.

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