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ver9大神出品，必属精品。 他作品台词的把握太好了，女方温柔的背叛，嘲讽的味道总是那么足。
就是这个套路真的用了十年了，应该更新了。
以及，评论里中文英文都说画风退步了，其实他上一作就这画风了，可能是老了划水了，可能是换了作图软件。

Last edited on 25 September 2020, 12:22.

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... What the fuck is wrong with that guy's face?

Like, holy shit.

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Is it just me or did Ver9's art turn bad, like the dude's face is just weird. His earlier works were beautiful, and to be honest is it the change in artstyle or the a different program he uses to draw.

Even his girls don't look as great as his earlier ones.

The stories too are boring, same old same old just repetitions of his previous works so the excitement isn't there.

Chad takes advantage of girl and she loves his big dick and then it turns out he has a lot of fuck buddies who are pregnant with his kids and has the husbands or boyfriends be the caretaker.

Ver9 was great but it just seems he's following the trend and phoning it in.

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怎么感觉老师画功有些退步？（是心理作用吗）

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thanks for upload. 작업합니다.

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Her open mouth is so distracting, in a bad way.... Bottom left on page 8, top frame of page 9, page 19 and especially bottom frame on page 23. Feels like something was attempted, miserably failed and just gave up.

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ver9.......he is god!!!!!

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Yeah Ver9 is done. Between declining art and ether repetitive or nonsensical plots I'm just not feeling it from him anymore. A shame.

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@reognengine

I feel the same, the art is not improving and the stories are repetitives, sad for a good artist and good first works

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I'm going to play the devil's advocate and say this: Although I agree about the artwork quality, this seem to be a spin-off of his previous work, since the netori guy seems to be the same: "鏑木". So it's not fair to critic the originality since it follows the same pattern as this one: /g/1335397/664954e269/ but with another wife.

Consider it a sequel/prequel of that work.

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Something just feels off since his comeback

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So much complaining, I don't get it. "Art not improving," "repetitive stories," "sad for a good artist and good first works," "Yeah Ver9 is done," "declining art and ether repetitive or nonsensical plots I'm just not feeling it from him anymore. A shame.," "he's following the trend and phoning it in," lol you're saying that NOW after after all his other works? Doubt any of you are actually supporting Ver9. Nobody can be happy I guess, always a "critic," around the corner ready to do nothing but bitch and complain, no real criticism at all. Apparently a few of these comments fail to understand the NTR trend, Ver9 will still be the best as the ratings show. All I'm glad that he is still alive, at least for now. Gonna enjoy my score being in the negative because I'm precise.

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也就二次元的苦主这么无能吧，三次元来个暴躁点的，这黄毛早没了。

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老师这么久才出一本，没断面描写了，遗憾
话说ver9有社交媒体吗

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老師這次是真的蠻久沒出了

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2020, second work of Ver9 and still don't improved the art style. Even Freedom Project or Taniguchi Daisuke are improved in this years (Although the Freedom Project continues to make shitty stories, the artistic style shows an improvement).

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沒有斷面圖好遺憾，不過ver9的一定讚

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@hobohobo

>>他作品台词的把握太好了，女方温柔的背叛，嘲讽的味道总是那么足。

此話怎說?溫柔的背叛?嘲諷的味道?

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correct me if im wrong but the current "NTR trend" is repetitive, chock full of cliches that rivals isekai and bland rehashed plots thats just basically the doujin version of "Hey, Can i copy your homework" meme...

NTR was supposed to be a genre that was thought provoking, mature and smartly written plots about very niche, but interesting subject.

Can't blame people if they complain when they get served by the same stuff over and over again like big dick guy wins vs small dick guy. Have yet to see a Big dick guy vs equally Big dick guy but the other wins because he was a better man in more ways than one.

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번역 빨리 급함

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번역 좀 해주세요 !!!! ㅜㅠ'

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