English version of Inma Kyuusei by Kazuhiro(Tiramisu Tart)
Thanks

Raw can be found here: /g/1183656/6f2adbf912/

Part 2:
Raw: /g/1305055/2e1b1e88c4/
English TR: /g/1357878/cdcaea2415/

Base +43, Fatesifaeve +33, sgc_geh +9, oh.boi.this.is.gold +6, E1drad +7, Th3 Sl0th +6, FrankenTunante +7, blue penguin +50, Lews Therin +18

Quite a few grammar issues here.
Page 4, 4 problems: "Maybe the women are in the nursery giving birth and the men, or are they slaves or food" becomes incoherent at the end there. "We catch you which will be our meals, I will eat you, until you dry" this entire line is a mess. "You think I will do, whatever you like" that comma has no reason to be there. "But they are all adventurers seniors" senior adventurers.
Page 5, 2 problems: "A pleasure, that even death won't matter anymore" seems like you cut out a description about the pleasure so the line sounds weird. "Now I will design my body according to yours desires" your not yours.
Page 7, 2 problems: "I will let you lick my pussy as much do you like" as you like, not do you like. "Now is bursting" now it is bursting.
Page 8, 2 problems: "Two worthy weeks always accumulating smegma" another incoherent sentence and not even punctuated either.
And we've hit 10 in 40 pages for poor grammar tag before even getting halfway through. If someone wants to expand the list, be my guest. I'd suggest you get someone to help you with this and fix it, because this is painful to try reading.

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thanks so much <3

Base +6, traynor +7, donek +6

Any chance for original resolution edit?

Base +19, Th3 Sl0th +6, karavanrob +14, Lews Therin +18

It feels like poor grammar in english translations has become much more frequent recently. I remember back when the only time I could expect shit like this was from Laruffi and CGRascal, but now it pops up much more often.

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Errr...There's no futa here???

Base +6, Tierno -6, Dooderz -8, Reapsta -5, Sylphvine -5, Drevlik -5, Anubert -6

>poor grammar
Aiya, could've at least used the original resolution.

Base +7, Natsam +14, Reapsta -5, karavanrob +14, Lews Therin +18, tobeunforgiven2 -27

Futanari tag with only 3 futa pages. feels bad man

Base +12, danielwain +9, Porokichin66 +9, PK Atomsk +9, Sylphvine +5, kiwino +14

why is the text darker than the bubble

it hurts...

Base +6, Braltewrakcus +10, Reapsta -5, Lews Therin +18

Shit grammar, shit font, shit tags.

Please try to improve

Base +6, Braltewrakcus +10, BobDringus +6, Reapsta -5, asdmaster +6, Lews Therin +18, kiwino -14, tobeunforgiven2 +27

Ignore the retards that just bitch and moan about everything, even though they couldn't translate one letter and put it in proper format. Yea there are some grammar mistakes but it's not a big deal, thank you for translating this, i've been waiting for ages to see it translated. Cheers.

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Ah...I didn't notice that there was futa actualy...For 3 pages...SMH.

Base +6

What they see is a poor translation. I see a TL that you can fap to. I see mistakes but nothing that cannot be salvaged by someone who actually cares to put the additional work. In the TLor, I see someone passionate enough to take time to translate a work (and all the other exhausting stuff that is not actually translating). And of course, I see very nauseating comments; people taking a shit on someone else's work before moving on to live their little entitled shithead lives. You are entitled to your opinion and I do believe we need more people translating: if translation is more popular then I have more to fap to. Thank you translator.

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fuckiiing finally, been waiting for an English translation for yearrrrs

Base +6, Mr.Morfeus +6

It feels like the translation was well done at a point but the guy started being lazy when copying it over into the image editor.
"I will show you my best technique to squeeze out all your GODDAMMIT semen" made me laugh so hard I got soft lol

Base +6, kiwino +14