rewrite and more accurate translation

So is this actually a rewrite, or just you rewording your old translation. Or both? Because if it's not an actual rewriting of the story, you probably shouldn't put that in the gallery name.

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If one bad translation isn't already bad enough, you had to do this second one, even with multiple people telling you to not do so.

Why would you do this?

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Rough grammar
p1 erosion zone -> erosion zones
beside -> besides
there are -> there's
use as -> used as
for these girl -> for these girls
help these girl -> help these girls
on just a -> on a
interfering -> interfere
p2 wall of meat -> walls of meat
encounter -> encountered
deflect -> deflected
p3 used it -> use it

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