There are a lot of issues here. "Sennin" is normally translated as "Hermit", not "spirit". The character names are Meiling and Remilia, not Misuzu and Remiria. It also looks like Ojou-sama was translated as "sis" at one point, but (correctly) as "my lady" in others.

There's also a lot of confusingly worded sentences. The first page in particular is hard to follow. Is this just edited MTL?

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these would be a lot better if they wouldn't make such a dumb face all the time.

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Something something Jesus told them the truth.

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这个作者很喜欢捆绑诶

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