As I'm not a translator, I won't comment on the translation quality or even say anything concerning the Rewrite tag that I see. But... Why did you use left align text when center text is far better...?
Don't people read comments? Didn't we had the "Use center align and not left align" topic like twice a week or so for several weeks now? It definitely feels like it for me. The same goes for use comic fonts. Don't people ask themselves "Why does my typesetting look bad? Maybe I should read a guide or look how other scanlators did the job." before publishing their work?
Just some questions going through my mind when I look at the amount of scanlations coming out looking similar do this work.