@Eleira With all due respect, your art is great and there's a lot i really like and i'm in no regard knowledgable of art production or anything related, but there's a couple of things that always bug me when i read your comics, if you'd like to know: First of all your content in this site kinda lacks context. Like i kinda guess where you are coming from, but never completely. Also i feel i don't get the characters or their motivations. Second, I feel kinda uneasy with something about proportions or the angles of the characters and objects. I feel like i'm looking through some kind of "Wide Angle" or "Fish Eye" lens. And finally tied to both of the things i kind of miss stuff on the framing. Like if it was pictures, it'd be too close to the characters to get needed context of the room and objects around and at the same time, the lens feels too wide for being so close.
I'm just looking to give my opinion and maybe somebody else might feel similarly or might disagree in every way.
Edit: I forgot to add that some of this might be your style and thats okay.
Thank you for your comment it is very appreciated. A part of that is actually part of my style but you surelly put an eye on something I could improve in the future!!
I ll take your suggestions and use them to get better so thank you for folliwing me, I hope you'll enjoy my art in the future :))
@blackheart327 Exactly its a commission I recived from Loupy and snowy, I absolutelly love theire 2 OC and love to draw them a lot eheh :)
Last edited on 27 October 2020, 08:02.
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