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want dinner, bath, or me ?
in the hentailand your choice doesn't matter
all choice lead to hot sexy time

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Cute vanilla story featuring an even cuter girl.

While the grammar is mostly on-point, I have a few suggestions that you may want to consider:

P2
Panel 6: "I haven't prepared it" instead of "I haven't prepare it".

P4
Panel 2: While "Could it be that you've gotten aroused?" is grammatically correct, it doesn't sound like something you'd normally say. "Could it be that you're turned on?" might be a more natural-sounding phrase.

Panel 5: Untranslated text -- "That surprised me a bit."

P6
Panel 4: "Didn't I tell you not to cum on my face?" might be a better way of phrasing it.

P7
Panel 2: "Says the person who made a mess on someone else's face" might be better, since "making a mess" fits with the "clean it up" request.

P8
Panel 4: "Just rest for a bit" makes it sound like he's telling her to rest. "I'll just rest for a bit" sounds better.

Panel 6: "If that's what you want" instead of "If it's what you want".

P10
Panel 1: Instead of "I still want to get even better", I think "I still want to feel even better" is a more appropriate line.

P13
Panel 5: "You can eat cup noodles by yourself" sounds like she's telling him to eat alone. "You can prepare some cup noodles yourself" might be a better line, because it makes it clear that she's not going to cook anything for him.

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@meow_pao. Thank you for the suggestions, we appreciate it. The translator still learn how to put a right word into it. He know the word that characters mean in Japanese, but hard to choose the precise word.

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So, moral of the story? Don't satisfy your wife before you had dinner!

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@kokokbeluk:

You're welcome. One final thing: on Page 4, Panel 5 it should be "That surprised me a bit", not "That's surprised me a bit".

Base +34, Megaton +45

我觉得这个翻译很适合中国人阅读，日本的这位翻译官虽然很明显不擅长英语日常用语，但就是翻译起来很可爱。

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