Jesus Christ I've wasted two weeks of my life going full autism on this shit.

Thanks to that one anon as you were a big help, you know who you are.

Rant:
I hate the guy who originally scanned this shit, seriously. Each page has / had about half a dozen or more scan errors that bitterly resisted all of my efforts to remove them. I can't even clean the cover page beyond this, as everything I've tried makes the scanner errors stand out like a neon light. Add onto that the fact that one page is set up so that 36 point font is tiny while the next has 4 point font go practically across the screen and the whole thing's been a complete headache to do. I've spent probably close to 60 hours on this tiny release.

If any god tier cleaners see this and want to clean the cover, please feel free and PM me the result, I'll update the gallery accordingly.

Merry Christmas, ya filthy animals.

Pretty strange to turn "～っ" into "~tsu", it's not very representative of the original intent, especially with it being small tsu (thus not actually being tsu in the first place). Can't really suggest anything else to do, but it really sticks out. Otherwise, thank you for the work.

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っ usually represents that a sentence cuts off or was interrupted. It can usually just be ignored when translating and you won't lose much meaning. Can also be replaced an ellipsis/en dash/em dash sometimes as well.
Also, I don't think the original scan is bad, the scratchy line work is just how the artist draws. And a lot of the white spots you removed were just sweat/fluid droplets flying off the character or were reflective surfaces on her costume. On the 7th page you even removed parts of her eyebrows that you thought were errors, but that's how the artist draws scrunched brows which you can see on the page before it.
EDIT: Ah, yes. Banding from scans are really annoying, you pretty much have to redraw them with clone tool which can be a huge pain with gradient screentones.

Last edited on 24 December 2020, 21:42.

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@LookAtYrOwnName
The scan errors are something else, there's vertical lines going down the entire page in various places where the scanner glitched or whatever and they are near impossible to remove. I've dulled them where possible when I couldn't remove them, but there's a number of places where nothing I did made them any better.
They're most visible when going over her stockings and sometimes her bunnysuit. Check the bunny ears on page 8 for example, tried to get rid of them as best I could but there's 4 there still faintly.
*edit*
"you pretty much have to redraw them with clone tool which can be a huge pain with gradient screentones."
I was trying, a few of them I tried for between 30 and 60 minutes for one line (most notably the ones on her knees and by her ankle on page 4) invested in them that no amount of tweaking and fine tuning with the clone stamp were able to remove even with the most autistic of pixel tweaking.
They weren't even the worst thing really, you can't tell it simply by looking at it, but the cover (especially the stockings) are basically fucked if you try to clean them to have any sort of neat moiré pattern to them. Every attempt I made at those left it looking like it had a bunch of water damage all over them, and believe me - I fucking tried.
https://files.catbox.moe/yh3tsp.jpg

Last edited on 24 December 2020, 22:01.

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