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LMAO that ending

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unsure about this ending, it just wants people to see what the hell will happen next~

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Death by orgasm, wow, that made me unreasonably hard.

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...so Iooking at the raws I figured the older one had just passed out or something. Nope!
I've kinda fallen out with these vengeful, "justified" rape stories. I get the idea, it's hotter if they're getting what's coming to them, but that comeuppance is always so much more than they deserve. Like these two are assholes, they abuse and push him around...so he fucking murders them? Literally rapes them to death? Fucking hell, man. Point for him getting his actual just desserts, I guess.

@Fringgs: Three hours of time-stop rape almost killed her, and a porn goblin just got a hold of the stopwatch. She's a goner. Hell, from the framing of that last page, that third-to-last-panel might be her last living moments.

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lmao what a dumb ass.
Elena is hot though, I wish theres more scenes with her.

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nobody see that ending coming

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Reverse death by snu-snu

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Well, that was kind of a disappointing way to end it.

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Despite knowing what I am getting into with this artist that ending was still a disappointment. The art is good but what does it matter when that is the only thing worth mentioning?

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@Zakuzelo trouble is, rape is never justified, if your rape someone it's cause you wanted to get your dick wet, any other reason is just an excuse

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Jesus, so she actually died?

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This is that weird kind of story where there's no heroes and actual bad things happen to actually bad people. It's hot, but... conflicted boner.

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humans are the real goblins...

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That can't be good...

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@Zakuzelo While it is revealed that the sisters have murdered many humans and dwarves, the guy was going to rape them anyway for the bullying they did to him. In the end I agree that even though there's a revenge aspect it's not really justified in that sense.

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@Zakuzelo: and how can you get away from all that rape exactly?
they are much more powerful than him, and they are haunty bitchs who have killed many before. You think he could beg for his life after that? or just run away, leaving everything behind and hoping that they can't track him down?
yes, he escalates it too much (like, he could rape them in secret like he used to do), but once he has committed, he has little to no options to save his skin. He either has to keep them as slaves forever, always worrying that they will kill him whenever they have a chance (which is high, since they are powerful elf), or just get rid of them..

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fan no hitori "oh boy, here I go killing again"

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Welp what can i say here? the art was pretty great and so were the scenes, the ending errr i mean it kind of stinks the way it ended but it is what it is i guess. RIP Big sister elf but compared to what the little sister is about to get from that goblin i think she'd be glad to be dead because as the saying goes, there are a lot worse fates than death.

I'm pretty sure being frozen in time forever while getting raped by a goblin isn't the best way to go out.... NGL the thought of getting fucked so much that your brain gets fried is pretty fucking scary O.o

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They really ruined the ending.

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Come on, why the bad ending?

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Dude that can stop time at will get's jobbered by a goblin. Between him and Sakuya I guess the ability to make the 4th dimension irrelevant means nothing to hentai logic

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And that is why you make sure you clear out the dungeon entirely when you find a massively OP time stopping weapon. You can get all the loot ever, and do it while being completely safe.

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Bah, what a way to ruin it. A good revenge fantasy, turns into a shitty Goblin Fuckfest. Blech.

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Fucking ruined

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I hope the tankobon releases the fate of "little sis".

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The ending was great no amount of bullying justify that and the hero was clearly going to steal / murder / rape more than those two.

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Man...Fan No Hitori really like sexual woman murder. Like, an uncomfortable amount-To the point where I think the guy genuinely has some kind of issue.

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I don't understand why people act so surprised. He's been drawing stuff like this for years now, especially the stuff he releases to fantia. Same thing with artists like Asanagi and Obui, you would think people would have understood their style by now when they've been doing the same stuff for years but still you get comments like this under every single gallery even when a doujin has been uploaded for the 10,000th time. It's like someone walking into a gay bar for the 10th time and complaining it's too gay but they keep coming back because they think the interior looks nice and want the bar to change(or in this case stop drawing stuff they don't like and draw more of the stuff they do like).

At least these girls weren't innocent/good like the random demon hunters he always kills off.

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@ loozerflydo

Because people want good writers/artists to get even better. After years of doing the same "girl is asshole to guy, guy rapes girl to death/mind break, the end", people start expecting more out of artists like Fan no Hitori (and Asanagi and Obui).

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@imercenary
Except you realize that not everyone has the same tastes and fetishes as you? Maybe these artists are drawing this because it's what they WANT to draw and not what is "better", whatever the hell that means in regards to a fetish or genre. For example, NTR is by far one of the most popular and best selling genres on sites like DMM original manga/doujinshi yet people want artists to "be better" by not drawing it because it triggers their own selfish sensibilities. And artists like Asanagi and Fan no Hitori are already wildly popular precisely because of the wide range of genres they are willing to draw and explore. Grow up and move on to artists that draw what you like instead of demanding every artist that draws niche content with an art style you like to change their preferences just to suit you or some perceived generalized group.

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I did not see that ending. Woah.

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Da Ef? So many simps virtue signalling in a Pron site! Ya think ya gonna get laid digging on Fan No Hitori? Noooooooooooooooop!

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Me: God, does anyone "win" in your stories?
Fan No Hitori: You don't win, you just do a little better each time.

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A common mistake for beginners.

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Ha! Wrekt by a Goblin no less. Serves ya right.

@imercenary
Imagine being such an entitled little twat that you think you deserve to dictate what what another person should draw with their creative talents in their free time, especially while jerking to their shit for free.

Here's an idea. Don't like it? Not to your tastes? Then Piss off and go make your own! Oh wait... I imagine you aren't talented enough to be able to? Maybe stop throwing shade then

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JUst got the tank from Akihabara......scans do not do it justice!

I must have done something right ruffling up the simps feathers! -70! Fan No Hitori.....FTW! The tank btw has a special two page insert showing even more nastiness to Claire and the Lily Knights! Also got a mispell with Time Stop Fantasia "CONTETS" cover sleeve.

Bitchy little sister elf is actually a red head and the demonoid is still enjoying both her holes! I page shot!

comradierie "simp"

imercenary "simp"

stockleyPrast "you hanging in a pron site doesn't have issues?"

ART65 "so?"

RedUnit10 "I'd rather it be a dogfest!"

UnlimitedBlades "You so virtous"!

robypoo "virtue signalling to whom?" Objectification is good yet raep is bad?

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bruh, bad endings again? man these are so disappointing to read when they end up like this

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honestly, my sympathy for this elves is like zero. i mean they even admit that they massmurderd humans and dwarf because they werent pure elves (wounder who reminds me of that).

And if you dont like the story. well. Some came for the fap and stayed for the story. If you dont like the story just ignore it.

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the ending sucks, i wish the main guy made a harem full of time stopped elves that bullied him, and just kept fucking them until they mind break

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i like it and wanted it to have a decent run like that knight boy's story oh well, i wonder what he'll make next

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@ Wing X Custom

dude it aint entitled to want something more from a someone that does something you like and things you dont. people need to get this shitty logic out of their heads because its the same logic as "dont complain if its free". we arent demand the guy scap whatever he's doing to write something we like we'd just prefer something different which we dont NEED to get.

@ fenrir72

it great to here that you have nothing of substance to bring. just another guy that comes on and says "hah simp/beta/cuck" about 20 different times. we get it, you like what the author is doing and dont like that other people dont like it

also a PSA: the ending doesnt matter really when you think about it.

just stop right before the "last" page and you have a very straight forward timestop rape story

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Is it just me or does the little sister elf look like Hamakaze?

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