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[Arisa Yoshi] Awakening Part 0.5

Artist CG
Posted:2021-01-08 17:07
Parent:1812546
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:1.65 MiB
Length:28 pages
Favorited:98 times
Rating:
68
Average: 1.93

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Posted on 08 January 2021, 17:07 by:   arisayoshi    PM
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https://www.patreon.com/posts/44607263

For the full part and more possession and TG content, please visit our Patreon.
Posted on 08 January 2021, 14:26 by:   Thelallus    PM
Score +19
Nice dosen't look half bad hope plan to make series of this looks good
Would like see full thing but don't coin to pay to see
Also its female possession not male most who read this can see that lol
Posted on 08 January 2021, 15:21 by:   The Goat is Watching    PM
Score +82
@arisayoshi I would recommend going for censored and/or lower resolution pages for public galleries, rather than just cutting out half of them in ways that make it confusing and abrupt.
Last edited on 08 January 2021, 17:00.
Posted on 08 January 2021, 16:08 by:   arisayoshi    PM
Score -47
We hope to release more free content once we have enough patrons and a steady income
Posted on 08 January 2021, 17:01 by:   The Goat is Watching    PM
Score +76
I'm just saying that seeing a gallery that makes barely any sense doesn't really entice me to go looking for more.
Posted on 08 January 2021, 19:33 by:   arisayoshi    PM
Score -45
The galleries is updated now, which part doesn't make sense?
Posted on 08 January 2021, 22:18 by:   Ranmaman    PM
Score +80
The way this is written and drawn, there are leaps in time between that aren't telegraphed and don't necessarily flow into one each smoothly. It goes from the wizard talking about "a power" straight to a new character feeling herself up, then a ghost escapes her. It's a followable series of events, but it's a jerky experience to read through.
Plus, just as a composition nitpick, jumping from panels 2-3 broke the 180 rule by having the character facing to the left suddenly be facing the right. Generally, that's a no-no in situations like this
Posted on 09 January 2021, 05:13 by:   KZGerald    PM
Score -66
This gotta be the first time in my life I have seen someone analyzed fetish hentai like it's literature. Is this satire? Just say you want to see the full thing for free lmao
Posted on 09 January 2021, 10:40 by:   Ranmaman    PM
Score +42
Hey genius, if you want an artist to improve their craft and create better stuff, what do you think is more productive: typing out a basic one-sentence response and leaving, or treating it like something worth critiquing and providing actual feedback? Were you under the impression that there's no amount of artistry or craftsmanship that goes into making good porn, maybe? Do you think that it springs from the aether, fully-formed?

Sorry the thought of giving feedback to artists so they could maybe make better and more satisfying porn never crossed your skull, but don't project what you want onto me.
Posted on 09 January 2021, 11:50 by:   KZGerald    PM
Score -60
I think you should get a life buddy. It's possession fetish hentai and a preview at that, the masturbation looked like a good enough tease and the girls teased to be possessed looks hot. It's clear you just want to see this for free so just admit it, your feedback won't even make it any hotter. I hope they don't post the free content anyway, there has been a possession drought for a while and it's clear to me people who thinks their "feedbacks" are more valuable than actual monetary support might be the case.
Posted on 15 August 2022, 17:48 by:   GTblackwolf    PM
Score +21
看封面还以为是艾伦耶格尔

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