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Fall of the Guardians Chapter 3 Ascension

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Posted:2021-01-09 12:13
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Language:English  
File Size:1.69 GiB
Length:149 pages
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Posted on 09 January 2021, 12:13 by:   hygotobin    PM
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Aurora executes a plan to save Maria and Rose from azure. Azure prepares for war. The pieces now in place the evil half of Marias plan falls into place and out of the ashes of this conflict a new demon Lord will rise! Meanwhile Beitris strength is tested for the first time in centuries.

Editors Notes: Hope you all enjoy Chapter 3 thanks for everyone who enjoys this story hope Maria's full transformation was worth the wait. With Maria fully corrupted its only a matter of time till the other guardians fall as well. Chapter 4 is probably gonna be my longest chapter yet hope you are ready lots of corruptions to set up and one gigantic corruption you should really be anticipating. As usual if everything isn't perfect I'm sorry I truly try my best but if I be too perfectionist you'd never see these stories. But I suspect anyone reading this far in is in it for the long haul. Also hope you like the change to the new software it definitely makes the designs more complex and fun.
Posted on 09 January 2021, 15:21 by:   eGXtreme    PM
Score +18
A-W-E-S-O-M-E.

The plot twist in the ending fight was awesome. I think we got a new juggernaut in this kind of corruption comics along with G9, Shinra-Kun and Cantraps.

I'm already your huge fan or i can say that i am your #1 fan hehe.

Right now i am really hyped to read ch4 :D
Posted on 09 January 2021, 17:14 by:   shaidar0    PM
Score +12
Kinda contrived for killing to be against her 'guardian' principles in between the guardians killing all the other demons

Edit: also redesign out of nowhere was kinnda jarting other tgan those two quibbles good work
Posted on 09 January 2021, 21:00 by:   bbcummings    PM
Score +11
Damn this chapter was great. Each new addition has come with massive improvements and I can’t for what comes next! You’re good at your craft, keep it up!

-DevilBookCorruptions
Posted on 09 January 2021, 22:31 by:   hygotobin    PM
Score +8
Well I see what you mean shaidar0 but you got to understand the older guardians at there core are hypocrites you see they preach purity and justice yet they already have blood on there hands before the series even started due to there sketchy past. Maria at least the good version of herself was pure always saw the best in people she always thought a guardians duty was to protect and serve so when she kills azure she doesn’t destroy the guardians principles cause the guardians have no principles but she’s destroying her own and what she perceived a guardian to be. Cause as I said the guardians are hypocrites especially Camilla, Aurora and Beitris I mean you found out this chapter azure and Aurora used to love each other that how this war started in the first place so Aurora the supposedly holiest guardian isn’t that holy. As for the change I felt it’d be interesting to do half in the old half in the new software. I can see how that could bee jaring I just wanted to try something new. Not to worry even if you were a little disappointed with where some things went next chapter is gonna have a lot of awesome stuff ahead. Especially cause now that Maria is the demon lord we are gonna start to see set up for a lot of the other guardians corruptions so there’s a lot to look forward to. Also it will all be in the new software going forward which I think has more options when it comes to corruptions.
Posted on 10 January 2021, 01:28 by:   jehovahwitness    PM
Score +6
futanari turns me off man :(, sorry.
Posted on 10 January 2021, 03:49 by:   hygotobin    PM
Score +14
Hey that is alright jehovahwitness that stuff isn’t for everyone for me I personally like it and prefer that over having to keep azure around to do the corrupting. But I understand it’s more of a personal preference kinda thing as with anything. I know some people will either love this turn of events or hate it doesn’t mean there still isn’t great corruption ahead. Not everyone will turn into futas just cause if that all happened it’d get boring fast I wanna constantly be changing things up.
Posted on 10 January 2021, 09:04 by:   foobythewatermelon    PM
Score +12
Hi, huge fan! I've got a few questions. Firstly, did you have any inspirations from others, such as Shinra or G9? Secondly, do you accept donations? And last but not least, I'd like to volunteer to help with proofreading the English. Is there a way to contact you in private?
Posted on 11 January 2021, 00:11 by:   AriesWarlock    PM
Score +19
Great stuff. Can't wait to see futanari demoness fuck that angel.
Posted on 11 January 2021, 05:28 by:   Solipsist    PM
Score +0
This is a whole lot of talking.
Posted on 31 January 2021, 07:37 by:   arc69    PM
Score +6
is there any updates?
Posted on 03 February 2021, 01:35 by:   Blue07    PM
Score +7
I Seriously loved this chapter. I particularly loved that protagonist became futanari. Somehow it feels much more obscene, vulgar and it suits evil demon a lot. can't wait to see her rape, corrupt and turn other guardians into demons. I wonder how strong corrupted Aurora would be... If Aurora was stronger as a guardian would she also become stronger demon? I really like the way Maria changed so far from the first chapter. There is a huge gap.
However the moment Maria was corrupted feels a bit strange. Corruption pattern where heroine kills villain for the sake of justice, feels pleasure, a sense of strength, superiority in doing so and then keeps falling is lovely but it doesn't fit well here. Maria's soul has been split into good and evil half. So it's strange that such evil feelings would sprout in the good half. all those evil impulses, desires should've been moved to the evil half. And even if somehow they sprouted in the good half it's strange that they would lead to her falling so fast. Erosion should be slow and grradual. Maria's good half resisted completely for so long before so it's strange that this resistance suddenly collapses so fast completely.
With soul split in good half it would make more sense for the evil half to convince the good half that she needs to accept her for the greater good, to defeat demon. Make her think: "I don't want to accept this evil but I need our strength to protect our friends!" Or provoke her that she is afraid that after becoming whole once again she will lose to her evil side, smth like:"I AM a Guardian of Justice! Even if we become one I won't lose my heart of justice!"

Accidentally killing someone innocent is a wonderful way to shake and then corrupt conflicted heroine but it's strange when it leads to immediate corruption of half which contains all that is good in heroine. Especially if the one she kills is an evil demon.

Sorry if I wrote too much. I hope it doesn't look like i dont like your work I really love it as a whole. I just wanted to get off my mind one thing that seemed weird to me... I really love that Maria became the main villain and I look forward to your next chapter!
Posted on 12 February 2021, 15:23 by:   jabemo10203    PM
Score +12
HypnoGoblin, any updates on when Chap 4 will be released?
Posted on 26 March 2021, 13:32 by:   arc69    PM
Score +16
any updates for chap 4?
Posted on 01 April 2021, 04:33 by:   JakeGonzales    PM
Score +18
Wonder why this stopped?
Posted on 13 May 2021, 13:50 by:   arc69    PM
Score +31
No offense but just to check what happen to the author?
Posted on 03 January 2022, 03:58 by:   onefang    PM
Score +20
Unfortunately according to his discord page as he posted in 4/11/21, he is giving up on writing erotica. He explained that he has personal stuff to deal with.
Posted on 20 January 2022, 11:39 by:   arc69    PM
Score +6
may i know what is his discord?

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