Raw : /g/1483567/f6d28fcebe/

@The Riva

In this gallery, your bubbles aren't fully cleaned. When I apply a grey leveling layer to your scans, I can clearly see the leftover text plus the rectangle tool you used to "clean" your text.
Page 4 of your gallery: https://puu.sh/H7xOF/d52294efe2.png
Even without the grey layer, if you look closely, you can see faint outlines of raw text. Please clean your bubbles fully.
Make certain that your opacity is set to 100% and that your whites are fully white because again, you have leftover text in every single bubble.

As an added option, you can export your files in 32-color greyscale to further cut down on filesize.

1.) Using the export to web option: https://puu.sh/GQDSu/8bc322505f.png
2.) Export settings for 32-color B/W PNGs: https://puu.sh/GQDXR/4e507aad3a.png

Keep on improving. Part of getting better is making mistakes, but you also have to learn from them.

Edit: Don't feel bad, Riva. You're not the only user making these mistakes on e-hentai. There are plenty of other galleries, some of them in other languages, that make the exact same mistakes you once made.

Last edited on 16 January 2021, 18:28.

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Obviously there's a lot of these types of self-insert 'tfw no Mika gf to get me out of depression ;_;' stuff but this is really quite nice. The art is really clean - it's easy to get overgratuitous in these types of doujins but Muteki always tempers his stuff and walks that perfect line of the good shit you want out of hentai with the right amount of realism. Phenomenal shit. Thanks for the Upload/TL !

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@THDragon

Regarding the previous galler, I've just removed it. Thank you for noticing.

My bad. I just realized my opacity was set to 99%. I'll try to be more careful next time.

Again, thank you for your constructive criticism and tips. I find them really helpful.

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Torilla tavataan

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aaaaaaaaaaahhhhh I L O V E M I K A so much ...finally this has a translation.

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Mika is a goddess.

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